|Reviews for Alone On A Night Like This|
| moms5thchild chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Interesting. By not revealing the whole conversation you have given the reader a huge world of possibilities. Mostly I imagine Charles letting Raven do the talking and then holding her close. Magneto (not Erik) would have been an unwelcome interruption, but I don't know who would be upset.
This is the kind of story I like. It is neither too obtuse nor too blatant. You have walked a fine line very well.