|Reviews for The Human Mask|
| Lanslet chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
lol, never thought a person with god-like powers under his belt would worry about being overweight.
I really like how the sentences just flow smoothly and how fresh humor are mixed along with the usual Natsume and Nyanko puns. The wording for description was great, light and simple is how I like 'em. Refreshing too.
I wonder if you're going to continue this however. Since it seems a lot filler-ish than actual story. (Well, I guess this whole thing is filler-ish, just a crystalization of what we've all been dreaming of what Natsume will become. God knows how much I'd wanted Natsume to become an allmighty spirit...)
Well, I'm really anticipating the next chapter.
| Shiki chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
Ciao. Wow, nice description of the way Natsume sees things~!
| Bagget00 chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
Very descriptive, well written, and great grammar. Keep it up, and hopefully sooner chapters. or possibly longer instead.
| reckless-rage chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
"Which, if Nyanko-sensei is any indication, means Natsume will triple in weight in a month, assuming that gods are capable of becoming overweight."
This made me smile. XD Very nicely written!
| Aimi-chan chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
Poor Natsume, so many new things to get used to. Still, very interesting. I like the changes, and I can't wait to see more!
| Ko-pia chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I'm so happy you're writing this! I loved "Worthy of a Name," and can't wait to see where you're going to go with this. You've just made my week.
| reckless-rage chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Sounds like an interesting start, so I'll be sure to try keeping an eye out for this. :)
| Krylancelo chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
I'm happy you wrote a sequel, but I feel bad for Natsume. And also for Madara. He might never get the book of friends this way. Will he still be Natsume's bodyguard?
| Aimi-chan chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Ooh, you finally did it! You began the sequel! I'm looking forward to reading more about God!Natsume and all the things he'll get into now that he's become a God. I'm especially looking forward to some reactions from his human companions, and how things will change with the spiritual ones. Good luck writing!