Reviews for The Eternal Professor
Lillian Forest chapter 9 . 3/31
i died inside when allen died, '( I love you for this story
littlechick2013 chapter 9 . 2/9
don't grade yourself down. the ending was perfect. adding the piano in the end, was brilliant! living for that long is a burden, and now he was finally free. it was great.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/26
I was actually crying. This was a fantastic story. Keep writing because u r amazing!
KillerAkuma chapter 9 . 11/28/2014
I LOVED IT
IT WAS AMAZING*Starts Balling My Eyes Out*
PosiedonGodSlayer chapter 9 . 11/24/2014
God damn thats sad
lovestotoro chapter 9 . 9/19/2014
No! You can't kill Allen!
lea3245 chapter 9 . 9/3/2014
Fuck u I like Allen
KK chapter 4 . 8/25/2014
I understand discrepancies and I tried, I really did, but I have to point out that 1) the day that the different schools arrived was said to be the day before Halloween: in October, given that this is an English school that starts in September and ends in June, April would be cutting it, especially with the Yule ball, 2) it was also stated that the other students arrived in the late afternoon if not early evening not morning.
Sorry about the nit-picking. Other than that I have absolutely no complaints... apart from wondering who Harry saw die in third year in your world that didn't take place in the books because he didn't start to see thestrals until after Diggory's death at the end of the fourth book.
Honestly this time, apart from that I'm finding little to no problems with writing or story telling and am truly enjoying this.
Thorn D. Cinni chapter 9 . 7/20/2014
The ending was nice. I would've have like to know what the 14th thought though...
Tyki075 chapter 9 . 6/30/2014
That was the best ending I've ever read. It was one of the best fan fictions I've ever read as well. You did a beautiful job. I was crying in the end, but it was sweet. I've never read a fan fiction that's made me cry before, so hats off to you. After all that Allen has been through, he deserves and ending like that, short, sweet, beautiful, not over-exaggerated. I loved it, truly an amazing fan fiction. (I'm just now realizing how sappy that review was, whatever, I meant it so I'm not changing it)
Guest chapter 5 . 6/19/2014
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19Teardrop94 chapter 9 . 6/18/2014
You made this short, yet you made it feel complete. I cried - who wouldn't cry? The way Allen stood up and face those 5 who entered, smiling before disappearing into dust like that... It put a picture-perfect image in my head. That really got me crying. Despite the minor errors that I saw throughout the story, they were easily ignored in favor of catching the spine-tingling moments you created.

I especially like the end of your last authors note: "Thank you all for you time and goodnight. I'm going to bed." Something about it, maybe how simple it sounded, really amused me. I laughed, which gave way to comic relief in my eyes.

Thanks for becoming a fanfic author.

-Tear
Pedobearlikesyaoi1234 chapter 9 . 5/11/2014
i was crying when i read this both playing 'Tsunaida te ni Kiss wo' by allen walker
T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
XxXFoxieXxX chapter 9 . 4/21/2014
That was beautiful... And so sad, I honestly cried a little at that end bit. Very well done :)
Guest chapter 9 . 3/16/2014
Nice story...allen's end was touching though.
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