Reviews for Invisible
CBlack19 chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
*insert "well that escalated quickly meme"*
Her death surprised me but it was symbolic of all the other innocents who died in war. We Potterheads sometimes get caught up in Fred, Snape, Lupin, Tonks and Colin's deaths and we ignore the other ones.
Hawki chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Su Li huh? Thank goodness for the Internet. Had to look her up.

Anyway, it’s a simple story, but I think it works well. The whole feeling/being invisible angle works well in the context of her being a cut/background character, which can be taken as being symbolic of background characters. Even if not noticed, they’re still there, and all that.
sierrakrystalblack chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Very well done. It was a great read and the last paragraph had great impact.

-SB3
Laura Scofield chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I've never heard of Su Li before, I feel like a terrible HP fan :O

This was extremely moving, once again you display your knack of being able to convey a lot of emotion in a short piece of writing. I liked how you showed the different sides of being invisible- the fact that Su Li was ignored and didnt have friends, but also the upshot later on of how she could use her invisablity to spy for the DA. I really wasn't expecting her death at the end, that felt very startling and poignant, and effectively conveyed how bruthlessly innocent people can be killed in war.