Reviews for Ghosts
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
This made me cry it is so beautifully written thank you for gracing us with this wonderful magical piece of work
Timeless Illusion chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I always have loved this. It has displayed a lot of themes that are sometimes not so common in the fictional works with these characters, and the way everything just flows is awesome :)
pickingupthepieces chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Hi. awesomeawesomeawesome.

i loved it.

somewhere there's a line that goes:

now know: at some point

something's going to


i'm guessing that it's 'break' and you tried to add spacing in between but the formatting wouldn't allow it.

that always happens on fp for my freeverse stuff. try pressing the spacebar twice or using something else.

anyway. awesome work. post more.
Dreameria chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Nice poetry. It flows, literally. And it's honestly great. I don't bother reviewing unless it's good and this is fantastic.
BlackKristin chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
You really should white about Molly, Lucy and Teddy. Like write their part in it.
ice queen chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
i really liked it!your take on the next gen is very interesting!

P.E.E.V.S.Y chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
This was wonderful. I adored it and I think, sadly it could very well be true. Great job!:)
jruthy96 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
really lovely and even though it's short and a poem you still get the sense of the characters perfectly
Chloe chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
That was brilliant! I loved the last line.
inClouds chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Very well written. I really enjoyed the rhythm throughout. Well done!