|Reviews for Hamau Pohaku|
| Cubit2 chapter 34 . 2/1
I'm impressed. Danny whump, a very interesting case with excellent use of Gabby, detailed original characters, action, great dialogue... You put it all together into a fast and exciting read. Very well done. Eager to read the sequel now. Poor Danny. As if this wasn't difficult enough for him. ;)
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/31
Oh no. Please dont have Gabby betraying Danny.
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/29
Smart Danny is so sexy. Add in courageous Danny and wow! Loving this story.
| detectivejiju chapter 34 . 1/21/2016
Awesome Fanfiction! I cant take McMahon out of my mind.. He's a damn psychotic guy. Enjoyed the whole way the story moved- Danny whump, Steve and Ohana (including Toast) finding it and the final showdown. Last chapter was sweet. Had fun reading it. :)
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 34 . 3/21/2015
good story and that guy was creepy.
| rukxichi.15 chapter 17 . 3/2/2015
Yay they saved Danny!
| Guest chapter 34 . 12/28/2014
I have managed to start at the beginning of this story a couple of days ago and just finished reading it. Awesome, wonderful, terrific job! Just loved the story and now looking very much forward to reading the sequel! Thanks for an awesome story. So sorry to read that you do not plan to write more H50 fiction. You are really very, very good at it! BTW, really enjoyed Cath's connection to Toast. I am sure you are right-that is something that would add rich depth and fun to the show.
| Rainey chapter 34 . 8/14/2013
I just came upon this story recently. Sorry I didn't review each chapter, but I just wanted to say that this was an absolutely fantastic read, full of angst, emotion, and lots of Danny whump-which I love. It was gripping and suspenseful, and I enjoyed it very much.
| LookAfterSammyDean chapter 34 . 1/18/2013
That was one awesome story . Thank you so much for writing and sharing it :)
| sunny irish chapter 34 . 9/22/2012
i just finished reading this story. wow girl, you went to a dark place with one. creepy, but a good read. well done
| lovesanimals chapter 19 . 9/17/2012
One problem though-Danny was the one who introduced Steve to Toast, so he would have recognized the voice.
| Lynnette chapter 34 . 9/11/2012
Loved it. Pure and simple. Great excitement all the way through, and a sweet, warm ending. Thanks for a truly enjoyable story! Until the next one, appy Season 3!
| DestinChild chapter 19 . 9/11/2012
Oh my gosh I have been so absorbed that I couldn't even fathom stopping to review. But now that they got Danny and he is fine then I felt I could stop for a moment. I love that Danny is their secret weapon and that even after all Danny has been through he knew what Steve needed and gave it to him.
| DestinChild chapter 14 . 9/9/2012
Accidentally moved on without reviewing. I was soo excited. Ok great job now on to the next chapter
| DestinChild chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
Ahhhhhhh best chapter ever! The Steve and Danny banter, despite the situation. And more married couple jokes. My slasher heart is in overload