|Reviews for Wilt|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/6
Another one that I am super fond of (maybe I'm really in it for Violet's mindgames, I honestly don't know). That wholly unexpected plot twist of her simply playing the game for keeps was so great. Tate's confusion was more than tangible and it just goes to show that however well he thinks he knows her, there's always another layer under there he doesn't know about yet. I think your characterization of her in this one was so interesting because she seems more sure of herself, more aloof and resistant but at the same time, she hasn't lost her mean streak when it comes to giving back as good as she gets.
I think my absolute favourite moment has to be when she asks, pretty much in passing, if he's killing everyone that may or may not be pissing her off just to flirt with her. It's so incredibly fitting and surreal that it made this story for me. Because no matter how twisted the methods seem, he's trying to get her attention, trying to prove himself the only way he can think of and it's a whole different level of sick and adorable.
On a side note - I love reading the interactions between her and Patrick/Chad (or really, anyone else living in the house) because there's a whole other dynamic of snark and bitchiness happening there that is hilarious to me. Of course, this one was almost a heart-to-heart for their standards but it's really nice to have intervals like that. Great job once again, I'm a fan of all this.
Best tidbit in this fic: Lorraine casually letting Violet light her cigarette on her skin. Fantastic!
| lily chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
This was so beautiful. IDK if you read reviews, or take requests, but I was thinking it'd be lovely/sad if someone wrote a fic that sorta inspired by the line in peter pan where hook tells peter one day there'll be another in his place for wendy, called husband.. idk if i'm making sense but AU and she lived and was set to marry, but he's the ghost in her heart and always will be..
| xXxXBlack StarXxXx chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This was SOOO good! I love your writing(: Please never stop. It shall make me cry if you do :(
| wildwriterrr chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
this so perfect. how do you do it? i'm absolutely in love; best one you've written yet xxx
| Lawrence Fitzroy chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
you are easily one of, if not the best, writer(s) for AHS. every single one of your fanfics are incredible. the intensity and the way you depict the characters... i wish i could write as fluently and well as you.
| xxxRadushPxxx chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I really love it, I think that you did great job with writhing from Tates POV ;) Love it! xxxxx
| Auvrea Rose chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I've read every single AHS story you've written so far in about a span of 4-5 hours. You are absolutely one of the best writers for Violate I've ever come across! Not only do you write the characters perfectly, your writing style just flows so beautifully! I can't wait to read what you come up with next.
| aljaxo chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Ah, I was waiting for a story like this from you. My favorite of yours is definitely Rest for the Wicked, but this one is up there. You have to be my favorite writer in this fandom; I really like your writing style, especially when it comes to dialogue and overall characterization. Even without much dialogue throughout this one, the atmosphere surrounding the plot and the attitude of the characters came through really nicely. I'm a sucker for canon and I think you do a good job of staying true to both Tate's and Violet's personalities in branching off from season one. Can't wait to read more of your work.
| Shoney chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I really enjoyed this story! Loved the progression between Violet and Tate. It was realistic considering the way Canon left them. Thank you for sharing your time and talent!
| ohyellowbird chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
i don't even know what to type in here. this fix /is/ your golden child. you went so far beyond my request, i can't even deal right now. it was perfect. i loved the way the entire thing felt. this tate POV may be my favorite tate POV in the fandom. it was so dead on. and weirdly, the little exchange between violet and tate and moira and tate when he's high on ether is my favorite part of this entire thing. he's just so fucked up adorable. but the smut and the gore and the coping mechanisms too. holy shit dude. i love you to the moon and back for this and for everything you've given this fandom. you're a goddess.
| daysofourhives chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I need to go find my husband. Now. Srsly.
Thanks for that.
| ScarlettWoman710 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I babble too much in my reviews for you work, but I can't help it. This is phenomenal. I love the appearances of the ghosts, I love the story, I love the smut. I love it all. Fantastic, as always, but I expect nothing less from someone so talented. cutting myself off before I continue to babble.
| paceyourself chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
dude where you find the time? :o
I need a minute to pick myself up off the floor.
| jandjsalmon chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Holy wow. *insert incoherent fangirl praise here* Really amazing.
| shenai chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Single handedly my favorite fan fic ever. It's beautiful writing, you've perfectly captured the characters voices, and the story itself feels authentic. Elegant, brutally raw and sweet.
My only critique is that when first introduced, the supplementry characters' identities are obscure. The story would flow more naturally if the readers understanding wasn't momentarily stunted.
I also found it difficult to appreciate the difference sometimes between a character being in the scene, and a character being mentioned. (one example being "Hayden comes looking for a quick fuck with what was his mother's favorite piece of twenty-something ass.") Talking about travis, while travis himself is not actually in the scene. I do understand, but found it obscure.
I became momentarily convinced at times that the story focused on characters who were niether tate nor violet, and found it difficult to correct my misunderstandings. Perhaps changing the repetitive "He's" and "she's" to occasional mentions of the characters names?
My favorite bit was the bit with Patrik and violet. love.