Reviews for Harry Potter and the Immortal Captain
Oblivious Dreamer423 chapter 21 . 5/15
Love the story! Do u plan to do a sequel? A sequel of Jack and Harry met again or maybe Harry travels with the Doctor a little before or after seeing Jack again…
JamesTKent chapter 21 . 5/13
Not the way I expected it would end, but satisfactory.
JamesTKent chapter 18 . 5/13
That's what people ALWAYS do. I'm reading this is the first months of Donald Trump being the President of the United States, and breaking every principle he can, and those who voted for him are still rationalizing his behavior.
JamesTKent chapter 16 . 5/13
Oh, definitely!
JamesTKent chapter 15 . 5/13
Damn! You don't make it easy, do you?
JamesTKent chapter 13 . 5/13
I cannot WAIT for the moment when Jack gives in and believes in Magic.
JamesTKent chapter 11 . 5/13
Sure, why not? Though, I know I'm way late to the party.
JamesTKent chapter 9 . 5/13
Yep. It worked well. I personally would have preferred more dialogue than expositions, but the story got properly told.
JamesTKent chapter 8 . 5/13
Nice reference to old songs, too.
JamesTKent chapter 7 . 5/13
Certainly an interesting shift in focus!
JamesTKent chapter 4 . 5/13
Ooh, nice last line!
JamesTKent chapter 2 . 5/13
Well, demanding them has the same effect on me as pointing a gun in my face. I just started this tale. What am I supposed to review?

That said, I like your characterizations so far.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/28
Please fucking shoot yourself
Just noticed chapter 4 . 2/3
You may want to change the location suzie shot herself - a bullet to the lower leg isn't typically considered a kill shot (it probably got autocorrected from chin to shin)
Scififan33 chapter 21 . 9/28/2016
Good story. Though Harry should have at least left a message for Jack saying he's alive but can't come back to them yet or something. Letting them all mourn him is just cruel.
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