Reviews for Everyone Else Can See It
micbb chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
I know this is old, but man, I loved this. It was hilarious.
hollybridgetpeppermint chapter 3 . 9/23/2014
Hehe...I like this very much!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/2/2014
I like the way you write
Anonymous chapter 3 . 9/5/2013
Very sweet
EsaHufflepuff chapter 3 . 7/1/2012
Giggle squeal "Yes!" jahaha this is the best ever
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 3 . 6/14/2012
...oh MY.

Sorry-I ought to be more coherent...but that was the only thing I could think to say!
Lita Snow chapter 3 . 5/30/2012
This was very funny! I was giggling through it, especially in chapter 3. I love it!
AcctClerk23 chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
I want to see this as a comic so badly XD "Cracks knuckles" Time to hunt down some artists that might be interested!
AcctClerk23 chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
"Palmface" Never really thought too much into it...but Numair is perfect material for a pervert XD
CrimsonQueen24 chapter 3 . 4/7/2012
Yes! I loved all three chapters! They were funny and serious at the same time...perfect :) The last one was the best though, especially the end! Fantastic job!
Firebird chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
OMG lol i was in the bathroom reading thisand i was trying not to laugh so no one would think i was crazy. great work
ShadowInArms chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
You should do one of Onua and Sarge...and George...and Evin and Muri!

Awesome story by the way! I was laughing at how Alanna tried to keep from laughing! LOL!

Please write more!

Pretty please!
Miri the Wildmage chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
CheyanneChika chapter 3 . 1/17/2012
Okay, I will admit...I read this during class and got in trouble for busting up at the end. Thanks for an adorable story.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
Liked that. Think you should do one with all daines animal friends finding out and threatening numair
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