|Reviews for The Dark in Peace|
| vanny98 chapter 12 . 3/12
Will there be any more of this fic?
| 1066wthec chapter 12 . 2/21
So was she beiing imperioused into being with Ron?
| 1066wthec chapter 6 . 2/21
| 1066wthec chapter 4 . 2/21
| 1066wthec chapter 3 . 2/21
| innocent94 chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
one story i always enjoyed reading
| Vi38 chapter 12 . 7/20/2016
This story is good
| Daerwin45 chapter 12 . 9/21/2015
Any updates coming
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/2/2015
Please, please finish this story. Especially since you're done with Vitam Paramus, which was good in it's own right, but nowhere in this story's league. You've got a nice plot going, decent characterization, and a very adult take on the HP universe. Just sit down and bang out another chapter, and then another. Do us all a favour.
| Daerwin45 chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
Any updates coming great story
| Eight7Seven chapter 12 . 2/25/2015
That would be an extremely awkward situation to be in. Questioning your best friend of eleven years the night after sleeping with his younger sister about the murder of his mistresses whom he's been cheating on your other best friend with. You really know how to mess with my head Endless!
The only theory I've been able to come up with about the culprit involves Luna and/or Hermione killing one or both victims. I really hope I'm off the mark and their are other clues I just missed.
Thank you for posting this story.
| Eight7Seven chapter 11 . 2/25/2015
I'm glad that Daphne seemingly isn't involved with Draco. I'm still not sure she has nothing to do with the case though. Draco was a lot less assertive than I had expected. I would almost describe him as world weary here, though coming down the the law office's of th MLE could explain that for an ex-death eater.
I enjoyed the banter during the dinner date quite a bit. I'm also looking forward to what clues might arise from the search of the apartment.
| Eight7Seven chapter 10 . 2/23/2015
I feel like I'd be a terrible detective. Ten chapters in and I have no ides towards the means or motive of the killer. Though I'm not quite convinced Gemma was killed by the same perpetrator. I had on odd theory that Hermione might have discovered Ron having an affair and iced Gemma in copy cat fashion to try and cover it up.
So far Harry's second dates look much better than his firsts, though he's about to question Daphne in a homicide investigation on there second. Not sure how that could end well.
| Eight7Seven chapter 9 . 2/23/2015
That was one hell of a twist. At first when Harry mentioned the picture I thought he was bluffing after he picked up on the signs that Ron was lying. When it become clear I was thunderstruck. The thing that really peeved me was I thought about Ron when Gemma was talking about the color orange. But without linking him at all with the possibility of being the man she was describing or a potential suspect. Just thinking of Ron's Chudley orange fetish, so close yet so far away.
This chapter was my favorite so far, I had planned to read one before tapping out, but I'm so juiced up that I need to read another.
| Eight7Seven chapter 8 . 2/22/2015
Well I can easily say my guess for the second victim and as such the perpetrator were off the mark. I'm honestly starting to find Harry's interactions with the world more interesting than the case. He seems either patronizing or dismissive to nearly every side character in the story. I'm looking forward to seeing if that continues.
The conversation with Hermione was very unsatisfying for me. It seemed much more hollow than I would expect. Even if they see each other daily (which definitely didn't appear to be the case) I'd expect more reaction when seeing your best friend. Also (kind of selfishly) I wanted more news as to Harry's relationship with his former life partners. It almost seems like the only person this Harry is invested in is Hannah. I'm wondering if Harry could be showing signs of PTSD.