Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences
amimai002 chapter 23 . 1/16
Awsome story! While dead and left on a bit of a cliffhanger, it's one of the best I ever read.
KuletXCore chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
I can call Louise "Patient Zero" or "Magical Girl Zero" because she was one of the first magical girls of Halkengenia, and will later on become the first witch.

Oh boy.


Please update, it has been years since the last one. Thanks!
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 23 . 10/11/2016
Poor Kirche. Things getting crazy, but couldn't a girl wish Saito into one and THEN he makes a wish?
meme sphere chapter 23 . 10/10/2016
great googly moogly it's all gone t and last updated 2 years ago :(
Fimbu1vetr chapter 23 . 10/10/2016
Sayaka noooo! O shi, didn't expect to see Mr. Elf again so soon. And really didn't expect Kirche to go witch heh.
HUE chapter 22 . 10/10/2016
NOOOOO. So gim turn to grif sid, MUST BE WAY BACK
Hue chapter 20 . 10/10/2016
Hue chapter 19 . 10/10/2016
Hope you continue this. This is quite a exciting crossover!
Fimbulvetr chapter 13 . 10/10/2016
O shit I thought this fic was dead. Good stuff!
Ibskib chapter 12 . 9/18/2016
HoW bAd - How bad

was not reviled - did not revile him

casted - cast

was reviled - was revolted

its tailed - its tail

I go am - I am

The little dud - The little dude
Ibskib chapter 8 . 9/17/2016
seems like proofreading was less than diligent, especially in this chapter, aside from typos and homophones, you really have a problem with leaving out words, such as articles, creating incomplete sentences.
I would strongly suggest getting a beta:

herself loathing - her self-loathing

andhadn't - and hadn't

oruse - or use

have bath - have a bath

imagine of - imagine if

the slat - the slit (the meaning of 'slat' is subtly different)

and airtight - an airtight

Rin? (not sure what that's supposed to mean)

thought himself leader - thought himself a leader

within the villagers - with the villagers

a mantel - a mantle

in surprise attack - in a surprise attack

fired - fire (two instances)

- me. Louise

roared defiance - roared in defiance

dismissed thoughts - dismissed her thoughts

He parried off - she parried/she warded off

possibilities human bullets - possible human bullets

waspromised - was promised

Wardes you turn - Wardes you turned

to her previous - to her previous ones

reigns - reins

do think - do you think

perused - pursued

the mast beam - the mast crossbeam

With grunt - With a grunt

noted him - saw him (to avoid repetition)

Your late - You're late

wasrather - was rather
Hii-tan chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
This is probably the best FoZ Crossover I've ever read. Not just due to how well written it is, but the sheer brilliance of having Louise summon Kyubey as a familiar...
MatthewBadger chapter 5 . 6/22/2016
*internal screaming*
ABSepolen chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
Ahh... heavens no don't sign that contract, Louise. Unless you do want to have your magic improve by turning into a Magical Girl but have you soul trapped in a jewel, suffer from soul sucking torment, and a strong chance of turning into a monster witch then please don't sign that contract from your familiar.
Mernom chapter 23 . 5/4/2016
You dropped everything to hell, climbed halfway back, and then went East. The way this chapter was written kept me at my toes, and the outcome wasn't too good or bad. Great chapter.
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