Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences
xfel chapter 23 . 5/30
Really great story! I love how you weaved the settings together into a convincing whole. Character work is also excellent.

On specific highlight are Charlotte’s MG abilities, such a nice unique way of doing things.
phosphophillite49 chapter 7 . 7/28/2021
Damn that's intense.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/1/2021
typo
Humans are can be so odd - Humans can be so odd
jeffgass20 chapter 23 . 11/15/2020
Tragic that this is the last chapter. Not going to lie, the fact that that fucking zombie wouldn't fucking die pissed me off a bunch.
anoneiricphilosopher chapter 23 . 8/30/2020
This story is wonderful. All the characters are so interesting and fun, as well as their myriad interactions. The way you've woven together the magic and lore of these two settings may honestly be the best I've ever seen in FoZ fanfiction, and I'm really curious to know more! I hope you pick this up again one day, but even if you never do I want to thank you for sharing this creation with the world.
TMI Fairy chapter 16 . 10/20/2019
Too much heaping of shit on our favourite liches - I got bored ...
TMI Fairy chapter 13 . 10/19/2019
Why did the leave the men hunting Siesta alive? They are scum which will .Missed ...
TMI Fairy chapter 9 . 10/17/2019
I hate you for letting Warbes live!
My my, the familiar is an information withholder and truth-twister of Obi-Wan calibre!
TMI Fairy chapter 6 . 10/17/2019
What a twist!
How kawaii!
TMI Fairy chapter 5 . 10/17/2019
They let Mathilde live?! How stupid is that!?
flairina chapter 23 . 10/9/2019
The fact that this is where this fic seems to have ended is a downright tragedy. I would be hard pressed to think of a single FOZ fanfic I've ever enjoyed more. Spectacular job on all fronts, even this story forever lies unfinished.
angeldude chapter 23 . 9/29/2019
That was an emotional roller-coaster. Knew next to nothing of Familiar of Zero going in, and came out wanting to see our rag-tag group of heroes make it out of this alive.

About Madokami: "before"? What is "before"? In a strictly linear sense, Madokami existed before Madoka. :P I joke, but there's always the possibility for an epilogue. Really, I want that less for their happy ending, and more just to see them meet the Holy Quintet in person. They really should get to talk with a more experienced meguca at some point.

Tangentially, I was surprised to see how little they tried using their traditional spells while transformed to see what kind of effects it might have. There also wasn't much follow up to Louise's remaining void magic as she was able to read the prayer book and her meguca powers definitely have a void slant to them as opposed to the fire she casts when untransformed.

Technically, Void exists as an element in Magia Record, though it's exclusive to Mitama. "Magic of the Soul"? Ya, that sounds like what Mitama does.

For Jeanette, we already have pink, yellow, blue, and (previously) red, and Jeanette would round out the rainbow with purple. With Cattleya slowly bringing her to the side of good and her tragic backstory contributing to her karmic potential, I can very easily see her as the fifth ranger and resident DMG (Dark Magical Girl). Overall, she very much gives me a Fate Testarossa vibe.
Spooths chapter 12 . 7/8/2019
Aren't the Incubators a hive mind. Much like the Borg. There aren't individual units beyond the physical bodies. So I'm not sure how a single one could be corrupted. Although actually I suppose it's like being separated from the collective in Star Trek. The difference being, it can still communicate with the rest of the species. Honestly I'd suspect them of immediately purging any incubators that develop emotions.

But she pulled a mini-homura and poured her emotions into an incubator. Cool. Although it'll probably backfire somehow..
Spooths chapter 11 . 5/25/2019
Kyubey is displaying too much emotion imo. And by that I mean any. It just breaks my immersion a wee bit.
Spooths chapter 7 . 5/10/2019
Tbh, I find it unlikely they can reverse the magical girl process. I suspect the only way to un-magic girl would be for someone else to make a wish that made them human again. Additionally, using magic does taint the soul gem. In fact, just existing slowly corrupts the soul gem. So they will need grief seeds to avoid becoming witches. Although I guess the incubators goal is to bring witches to this world so they can make more magical girls.
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