Reviews for Harry Potter and the Puppet of Time
BlackStarMage chapter 14 . 4/25
H-hand holding?! How lewd...
meekerprincess9778 chapter 22 . 2/6
absolutely love your story... can't wait for more
meekerprincess9778 chapter 4 . 2/5
I'm just starting chapter 4... but I am really appreciating the long, detailed chapters...
Mastersgtjames chapter 22 . 7/16/2021
This is clearly what ended this story. I mean, its nonsense. MC is not using his foreknowledge to really prepare. In the sense he has not tried going after the other horcruxes. Calling Kreacher. Or dealing with his Father. Then you have this with Riddle being resurrected anyway, with the MC not having done anything to stop it(like destroying all Riddles relatives corpses), as well as having Riddle seemingly immediately get into the DoM with no problem.
Mastersgtjames chapter 21 . 7/16/2021
So... Draco had NO backup wands? His House Elves only listen to his father? not him? even with him being the one they are bound to? WHY is Draco not just killing his father? OR better yet, why did he not obliviate his mother at the Cup, or Obliviate his father into a coma or something.
Mastersgtjames chapter 19 . 7/16/2021
So... why is Ginny's Occlumency so good, and Daphne and Aquila's so bad? When Ginny has been practicing it for less time.
Mastersgtjames chapter 18 . 7/16/2021
Really feel like Draco should do something to remove his father. Either killing him, or permanently disabling him.
Mastersgtjames chapter 17 . 7/16/2021
Really feel like Draco should have passed Sirius to Amelia Bones BEFORE going home, while Dumbles was distracted.
Mastersgtjames chapter 11 . 7/16/2021
Really!?
Abraxas is poisoned, then attacked by Werewolves, including Greyback... and Draco does not know/suspect Lucius? What!? He should have just straight-up stunned/bound his father when he was not prepared, then questioned/killed him. There are TONS of ways to hide his involvement. Or to make it seem like an accident.
Mastersgtjames chapter 10 . 7/16/2021
Going to be really disappointing if Abraxas is actually killed by Greyback. I mean, cmon...
Hope Draco saved/saves some Basilisk Venom, maybe gets a couple of the teeth. Definitely would be useful.
Mastersgtjames chapter 9 . 7/16/2021
Really hope this is not gearing towards a DracoXGinny relationship. I just do not really like her. Even if the Ginny in this story is a better, more likeable person than the one in Canon.
Not sure if I missed it or if it was not described, but since when was Ginny a skilled Occlumens? Even more so than Aquila.
If MC was gonna tell his Grandfather he had a vision in regards to a Horcrux he might as well have claimed to have had one about ALL of them.
Mastersgtjames chapter 8 . 7/16/2021
It's honestly annoying how incompetent Lucius is. But more so that both Draco and his Grandfather have not noticed what he is doing, or even bothered to investigate/confirm whether he was involved in the poisoning.
Mastersgtjames chapter 7 . 7/16/2021
Uh... shouldn't that poison have not worked? I thought the potion he took gave him 7 years of perfect health and immunity to poisons, illness, and disease.
Mastersgtjames chapter 6 . 7/16/2021
Lucius killing his father seems odd. Especially with him knowing his father is already passing on his duties to him. Even if he does not know that his father is going to die soon anyway.
Mastersgtjames chapter 5 . 7/16/2021
Kinda disappointed that Draco did not try to get the Locket from Grimmauld somehow. Maybe have his grandfather take him there? Or Show his Grandfather the Diadem and mention feeling something similar from the drawing room floor in Malfoy Manor, then he could say it might be a good idea to check Grimmauld Place and Bella's Vault if they can...
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