Lastima que hasta aquí llego. Muy buena historia, pero sin final. Que triste.

Great story! I like how you’re making it your own, giving some advantages without being ridiculously overpowered or letting him solve everything with no real effort. I hope you keep going

This fic is a lot of fun. I hope you eventually decide to update it.

ME ENCANTA ESTE FIC LO UNICO MALO NO SE ACTUALIZA DESDE 2016! QUEDO TAN EN SUSPENSO

H-hand holding?! How lewd...

absolutely love your story... can't wait for more

I'm just starting chapter 4... but I am really appreciating the long, detailed chapters...

This is clearly what ended this story. I mean, its nonsense. MC is not using his foreknowledge to really prepare. In the sense he has not tried going after the other horcruxes. Calling Kreacher. Or dealing with his Father. Then you have this with Riddle being resurrected anyway, with the MC not having done anything to stop it(like destroying all Riddles relatives corpses), as well as having Riddle seemingly immediately get into the DoM with no problem.

So... Draco had NO backup wands? His House Elves only listen to his father? not him? even with him being the one they are bound to? WHY is Draco not just killing his father? OR better yet, why did he not obliviate his mother at the Cup, or Obliviate his father into a coma or something.

So... why is Ginny's Occlumency so good, and Daphne and Aquila's so bad? When Ginny has been practicing it for less time.

Really feel like Draco should do something to remove his father. Either killing him, or permanently disabling him.

Really feel like Draco should have passed Sirius to Amelia Bones BEFORE going home, while Dumbles was distracted.

Really!?
Abraxas is poisoned, then attacked by Werewolves, including Greyback... and Draco does not know/suspect Lucius? What!? He should have just straight-up stunned/bound his father when he was not prepared, then questioned/killed him. There are TONS of ways to hide his involvement. Or to make it seem like an accident.

Going to be really disappointing if Abraxas is actually killed by Greyback. I mean, cmon...
Hope Draco saved/saves some Basilisk Venom, maybe gets a couple of the teeth. Definitely would be useful.

Really hope this is not gearing towards a DracoXGinny relationship. I just do not really like her. Even if the Ginny in this story is a better, more likeable person than the one in Canon.
Not sure if I missed it or if it was not described, but since when was Ginny a skilled Occlumens? Even more so than Aquila.
If MC was gonna tell his Grandfather he had a vision in regards to a Horcrux he might as well have claimed to have had one about ALL of them.