|Reviews for His Cimmerian View|
| boomerand chapter 2 . 1/24/2012
another intense chapter!
| boomerand chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
wow - this edward has some ISSUES!
| Nissa-Cullen chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
How old is Edward? He's a little young to be having a heart attack at 28 isn't he? Maybe it's a panic attack or angina? I feel sorry for him and his view on women. Maybe that will get better in time. Is the cleaning woman Bella? Can she not read or was there another reason she didn't see the sign? I can't wait to read more.
| j-bird456 chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
very good! This story is going to be interesting.
| crystina88 chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
| melissamary55 chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
love it is a really interesting story and is bella 13yrs old in the story or is bella sibling 13yrs old update soon
| chanahope chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
VERY, very good beginning. Something g in Edward's past has him really hati g women..Update soon!
| queenbee311 chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
Wow again...Shit I feel so bad for him I'm hurting. He obviously has never had love which is sad but its not over till its over. Oh and by the way the cleaning lady and the young woman who helped him in the parking lot is Bella(got to be). You two are so good. Thank you for the ride! I hope your next update will be sooner than later but will understand if its not. Stress is a terrible thing, maybe he should talk to Jasper. js
| Moltz chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
Interesting chapter. Several thoughts, since Edward is so physically active in the gym and during his Monday & Friday visits to the club I'm guessing he suffers from severe panic attacks. Possibly stemming from something during his childhood? related to his parents death?
His demeanor birthed out of need to protect himself from the repeated pain of loss and or feelings of abandonment?
Now on to our little miss Bella the janitor. Could Bree be Bella's half sister if so where is the other sibling? Is Bella illiterate? Is that why the white board was erased and why she shocked herself at the clearly marked outlet? Is Bella following the class assignments by listening to the books VIA earplugs while working?
Since a tingling sensation was mentioned when the young lady touched Edward's wrist I'm presuming Bella was the one to call for help and stay with him until the EMT arrived. Hope the three who took his wallet find themselves on the receiving end of bad grades at university.
Looking forward to more!
| queenbee311 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Wow...and it so started with his mom. Poor guy never had a chance since his father died. My heart hurts and its already pulled me in. Thank you for sharing. I'm in on this ride.
| jess2002 chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
keep up the great work ladies!
| Lilypad10 chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
I think he is still an ass! He is selfish and very hard to be around
| loomeylumes chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
VERY Interesting luv, I like the plot so far. Can't wait to read more!
| MustangMel1968 chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
It's so hard to leave a review without revealing plot. Everytime I start to say something, I stop and think, that hasn't been revealed yet or that's definitely in the next chapter! So here's something I CAN say! I can't wait until the next chapter and I'm glad that other people are liking it as much as I do!
| queen cullen0527 chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
wow didn't see it being edward hurt. I wondering what happened to the boys. I bet they are not in class but know someone who is. I bet em n rose will be poed when he doesn't make it to their announcement. I think bella was helping him at the of chap. Teaser plz great quick update hopefully another one soon.