Reviews for His Cimmerian View
fallingsnow87 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
OMG I can actually make some sort of REPLY! FF has been so messed up lately! Is is that way on your end also? Well, I better make this review quickly before it stops working again. haha Wonderful chapter. Last one was a bit heart wrenching, but I made it through it! Keep up the great work!
forsey1987 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
great chapter!

if bella was 13 when she left school why cant she read and write?

cant wait for the next one.
Bunch2009 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Loved it! I feel so much for Bella but she is a very strong and hardworking woman and I admire her for that. He has a long way to go but this is a great start. Excellent chapter. Thank you
ClancyJane chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
I am glad that Edward has done the right thing... telling Jasper, because his insight is an invaluable tool and I am actually looking forward to him 'healing' Bella - more so than Edward falling in love with her... at the moment : )

She will be safer working a Edward's housekeeper, at the restaurant, Im not sure.. I have a niggling feeling in my stomach...

I swear to God that if that whore Gina comes near Bella again, I will rip her fake tits from her chests and shove them up her scrawny ass ! **that goes for Rosalie too**

xxx
boomerand chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
this gets better with each chapter!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Poor Edward, so clueless!
angeleyes73 chapter 5 . 2/16/2012
I am mixed about this story, I really, really hate Edward about now but I would love to see how this story plays out. I look forward to the next update.
SRVampire chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
I hope this is Edward's turning point because he was truly a jerk in chapter. What he needs to do is get Bella a raise for college job. She not only has to deal with messy classrooms but also with a professor who has some really screwed up ideas about women.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
Edward is an idiot. It doesn't help that he's been Hirt a number of times so he's just reacting the way he knows how to keep himself safe. He's still an idiot though because he causes so much pain in the mean time. Bella is a saint for helping him out the way she did. He needs to see her for who she is. How old is she really?
Kamilla86 chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
I need to tell you how much I love this story!

I just cant wait for the next update :)

Thank you for amazing writing, and -so far- an amazing plot!
irishmic chapter 5 . 2/13/2012
Kasi and Nikky,

dickward definitely did not score any points with me this chapter. Unbefuckablievable! Yes, he could do with some pain from a Master at Aro's. Perhaps the Irina's special, studded dildo in a very tight orifice. Maybe Aro or Felix can kick his ass. I am thinking felix already took care of one asswipe that made inappropriate comments to their adorabella. dickward is very judgemental.

gina is quite special too. hopefully she will get her cumupence (and not a pleasurable one at that). Points scored by mrs. cope. she seems to have a kind heart and a soft spot for isabella.

At the least, dickward needs to replace the cd player - perhaps with something from this millenium. I am guessing that bella suffered at the hands of someone & has much healing to do. Will dickward hire her for the restaurant? I think bell would work well with Taylor (she did in Friday's Noon).

will wait as patiently as possible for more... til then,

micki (irishmic)
irishmic chapter 4 . 2/13/2012
you two lovelies,

I have added your story to my favs. Raum rec'd you on her blog. I reviewed, got so enthralled in the story that I missed the beginning of the Grammys and now I am back again. Darkward is definitely wounded. Looks like he found a bell-bell that is as well.

Aro's mom sounds like a nutcase - nice nutcase but still quirky. She seems like good people deep down though. Serves Aro right. I have to wait to see what exactly happened that has scarred darkward to the point of pushing back on all things feminine, well except for bella. And, bella has a story too. If she had to care for siblings, seth and leah are a good choice. SM had her caring for seth like a younger brother - it seems fitting.

thanks for posting, I will keep reading.

irishmic
jello2298 chapter 5 . 2/13/2012
This chapter absolutely tore my heart out. Its absolutely heart breaking and I feel broken for both. I know he's being a sh*t but the circumstance that got him there breaks my heart. And she is just so short on luck. I hope it lightens up a little soon, both deserve some happiness
mariter chapter 5 . 2/13/2012
Wow. The mix of emotions from this chapter were all over - anger at Edward, sadness to the point of tears at Bella's story. I can hardly imagine what has happened to her in her past. Glad Aro straightened out Edward with some of her story and glad Bella stood up for herself at the end.
bluevolvic chapter 5 . 2/13/2012
Found a new story I love! Edward is quite the character,I wanted to cry this last chapter,he's been so mean to her and he broke her tape recorder! I wanted to punch him for that lol I hope he's gonna buy her a new one?
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