Reviews for His Cimmerian View
ClosetReader chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Again, I'll say how much I love the story! Another great chapter and I can hardly wait for the next update!
auroraboralis chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Good chapter! Well, at least he is trying!
annaharding chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
He certainly got himself into a mess! And his verbal filter is SO out of whack!

Jasper must have been totally confused by all the rambling coming out of Efward's mouth! Hopefully he does not "share" with the family what went on.

Is Isabella really that naive? Even if she was kept in the house most of her life, she's still been out and about for awhile now.

Anyhow, very excited to learn more next time - thanx for this update!
pnkats chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Yeah it's a start but he has to be consistent with it
cbmorefie chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Excellent update!
toocute24 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Wow! Reviews are actually working again... Yay! Thanks for answering some of the questions in your ending A/N. I was curious about them myself, but never remembered to ask! Lol

Great chapter! I'm glad that Edward is beginning to make amends to Bella. She definitely deserves it... And he was a complete asshole to her. Ugh! I wonder what Edward is going to so when he finds out that Bella is illiterate. I hope he helps her like he helped those other people in his class. He can be a good guy sometimes.

Thanks for the update Ladies! Can't wait for more!
ChocolateLover82 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Oh God, this story makes me want to hug Bella and give her a job. She's so beautifully innocent, it scares me. Someone will take advantage of her and I pray that it doesn't happen. But I so fear for her.

So many questions with her. Why doesn't she know how to read and write? She was 13 when she was left alone to take care of her siblings, she should've known those things by then. Were her parents (caratakers?) that neglecting? It makes me ragey if that's the case. And how did she survive until she was 18 without anyone knowing she was a minor taking care of babies (her siblings are so young)?

God, all this makes me want to punch Edward so much, lol. He really screwed up big time with her. He better make it up (and thankfully he's starting) or else I'm gonna kill him. For realz.

BTW, I hate Gina and I fear she will be big trouble for Bella.

Oh boy, so many feelings, lol. I really love Bella though and I just want to see her happy and enjoying normal 18-19 y/o girl things.

Thanks for sharing, sweeties.

Love, CL82
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Is Bella unable to read? Is that why she asked Edward to explain the address? Great story!
telaviv chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Loving Jerkward's new self awareness;

And why do I feel like he's going to flip out on Bella soon again?
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
I love it! :)
foxylady1on1 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
I get Bella canr read or write,BUT how she was 13 when she HAD to take over looking after the "

2 year old twins but cant every 13 yr old read and write?or was her childhood really that bad that she NEVER went to school?

love it update soon x
fallingsnow87 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
OMG I can actually make some sort of REPLY! FF has been so messed up lately! Is is that way on your end also? Well, I better make this review quickly before it stops working again. haha Wonderful chapter. Last one was a bit heart wrenching, but I made it through it! Keep up the great work!
forsey1987 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
great chapter!

if bella was 13 when she left school why cant she read and write?

cant wait for the next one.
Bunch2009 chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
Loved it! I feel so much for Bella but she is a very strong and hardworking woman and I admire her for that. He has a long way to go but this is a great start. Excellent chapter. Thank you
ClancyJane chapter 6 . 2/16/2012
I am glad that Edward has done the right thing... telling Jasper, because his insight is an invaluable tool and I am actually looking forward to him 'healing' Bella - more so than Edward falling in love with her... at the moment : )

She will be safer working a Edward's housekeeper, at the restaurant, Im not sure.. I have a niggling feeling in my stomach...

I swear to God that if that whore Gina comes near Bella again, I will rip her fake tits from her chests and shove them up her scrawny ass ! **that goes for Rosalie too**

xxx
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