|Reviews for To be a Family|
| Druidentanz chapter 11 . 2/11
I loved this fic. It's truely heartwarming especially the last chapter. I love your characterisations of the crew.
I think i'm going to stalk your profile.
btw the german plural is "Klabautermänner"
| malefan chapter 11 . 11/11/2013
Awesome! I really liked this chapter. Never thought of Sunny s his own character before.
Hopefully Luffy can talk to it in the manga one day. After all, he can hear the voice of things just like Roger could.
| Darth Luffy chapter 11 . 8/8/2013
This was great, all of them were so well done... I loved the Nami one in particular, I don't think she really realize what it meant to sail with Luffy until that time on Enel's ark but you showed how she began to understand that despite his childish nature he is suited to be the captain
When I saw read the Vivi chapter I knew that Merry would be next and it still got to me, comnecting it to the Sunny was great and it was probably my favorite chapter... Merry showing up at Enies Lobby to save them and then the subsequent funeral was probably the most emotional moment of any manga I've read, and you gave a great tribute to that
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
I like Brook the most, mostly because he covered ALL of them at least once and he considered how they interact with one another as well witch is intresiting in what that does you didn't og into that much detail on how they influence one another but you did, so it was awesome and it covered your concept idea the best witht he full crew.
well tis a toss up between him and Franky, who considered each group.
dont get me wrong I liked all of the chapters really well and it was nicely done.
but Brooks, you also captured the character really well with some of the little things,
Franky was tad off or a few parts of him wernt shown but that might just be a matter of interpretation.
and ahh I think it would be Klabuterns. but that might just be a guess on my part.
| SqueeFreak chapter 4 . 2/6/2013
I laughed so hard at that last part! XD Poor Chopper, Zoro is such a horribly stubborn patient! XD
| sylver rain chapter 9 . 9/27/2012
| Sigil Dagger chapter 11 . 7/8/2012
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 11 . 6/23/2012
So, umm, I'm totally crying right now, in the tears-of-happiness-and-over-emotionality way, if that makes any sense at all. Wow, that was so beautiful and wonderful and I knew I was going to cry, and I was so PROUD to have made it to the last chapter and then I got to the words "Sunny knew that he was a pretty super ship" and my heart just broke. Seriously, just fricken shattered.
| Purple Handprint chapter 11 . 6/18/2012
THE SHIPS! MY GOD, YOU GOT EVERYONE. 3
| Purple Handprint chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Robiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin! Oh yeah, Robin and Vivi are my two favorite characters, so... I liked those two chapters the most. Vivi's chapter was better, though, even though I like Robin more.
| Purple Handprint chapter 10 . 6/18/2012
Vivi! 3 She's a Straw Hat, and you included her. :D
| Lilly Burnside chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
I noticed you wrote defiantly several times instead of definitely. Like 'Luffy defiantly stood in front of Crocodile, preventing him from harming Vivi' instead of 'He was definitely not afraid.' they are two completely different words meaning two completely different things. Sorry if I'm being nitpicky. Other than that I really enjoyed it :)
| beadwork chapter 11 . 6/1/2012
| Rainstrom chapter 11 . 6/1/2012
I freakin' loved this! Merry-go, Sunny-go and luffy's parts were seriously awesome. great job!
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 11 . 5/24/2012
Heh heh... Strawhat-ness... I almost started to tear up at Merry's part, because her 'funeral' was one of the saddest moments in One Piece history, only being surpassed by Ace's death. And sometimes it's the accidental endings that are the best, as this shows. I love it when stories come full circle. It's my favorite kind. XD I loved this entire thing!