|Reviews for To be a Family|
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 1/13
Nice touch on the descriptive on how Vivi and Robin viewed Merry as a home
Broke out laughing when Sanji discovered the fridge for the Sunny had a lock
Nice touch for the end with Brook and his song
Thanks for this story! Hope to see more of your work!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 1/13
Yeah, I can see Vivi doing all of this
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 1/11
I like your observation about how Zoro had seen sacrifice until this point. And yeah, just saying "It's the Grand Line," is a fair explanation for anything that might seem strange
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 1/11
Like the transition from how Nami considers her responsibilities to her epiphany over Luffy
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 1/11
Yes, that is ironic that the liar is trusted so much and is so trusting. But yeah, it is easy to see why people think Luffy is insane, although that only leads me to paraphrase "Who is more insane? The insane man or the insane man who follows him?" X-P
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 1/11
Hmm good point on the initial difficulties Sanji would have switching careers. Strong wording for the role respect plays amongst the crew. Even when Robin first joined they (mostly) did not trust her, but they all respected that she knew her business
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 1/11
LOL that Chopper's problem is that his crew both keeps getting into harm's way, but are still too tough for him to just knock out
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 1/10
You should not doubt yourself here, the whole thing was very well done. Brilliant point that while they frustrate each other to pieces, they do not try and force each other to change, and Robin's POV was just fantastic! Thank you!
| Wera chapter 11 . 11/9/2015
This was glorious, like wow. I loved it so very much. The way you capture the characters is beyond perfection and so very beautiful. I love love love your writing, this was amazing. (The last few chapters especially.)
| Madam Death chapter 11 . 8/15/2015
I really like this story especially the last chapter about Merry and Sunny. Thank you for writing
| Yuuzhan Vong Jedi chapter 11 . 4/6/2015
Oretachi wa family.
| Yuuzhan Vong Jedi chapter 9 . 4/6/2015
"Robin would find her mystery words". Yep. That's Luffy. 100% undiluted Luffy.
| Yuuzhan Vong Jedi chapter 6 . 4/6/2015
Most fitting indeed.
| Yuuzhan Vong Jedi chapter 5 . 4/6/2015
I somehow would have expected that encounter to be more... explosive. Zoro and Sanji actually acknowledging the respect they have to each other? Madness!
| Yuuzhan Vong Jedi chapter 4 . 4/5/2015
Sorry Chopper. Death is the only cure for stupidity.
And I don't know, I like Chopper when he's fighting because his childish nature means you always feel like you have to cheer him on so it feels even better when he wins. Still, I agree that when they aren't fighting, his childish nature does get a bit to cutesy.