|Reviews for The Secret Language|
| Late4F8 chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Very interesting to include ASL in the Saiyuki verse. I have only a little experience with ASL, just some basics and alphabet, and I'm enjoying exploring it more through here. I think you did well with Sanzo knowing ASL, but he's put off using it because he feels exposed. And I like Goku and Kali's interactions, his exuberance to learn.
| sarupetto chapter 4 . 3/19/2012
love it! more! more!
| laurose chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
A moving chapter, and I think your Gojyo's pretty good. I take it 'unable' was a polite translation of the term the villager used.
Good, that "The best conversations I have with myself."
As meant, I'm intrigued by the doctor.
| laurose chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
I love the name bit.
Of course it would be Goku, passing it on. A really canon echo here. As is your Goku, altogether.
| laurose chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
Thanks for another chapter of this fic. It's keeping its canon atmosphere.
It's easy to go wrong with OFCs, but Kali is neither too pushy nor too clingy.
I like Sanzo's hating the expressions.
(Just wondering. Kali would probably trigger Gojyo's chivalrous instincts – in a nice way, he's one for full grown women. Likely Hakkai's, too. I'm wondering what they're doing?)
| laurose chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Good idea. It fits surprisingly well into saiyukiverse. So is Sanzos learning ASL.
Your Goku POV is very good, too.