|Reviews for XCW: Xtreme Cartoon Wrestling|
| Emmanuel chapter 55 . 2/20
Welcome back, Ivan! Boy, did you start things off with a bang! Early and Shake were right - Rolf and Kenny did went everywhere, but the ring, and they throw everything each other, expect the kitchen sink. And what Space Ghost said about adding new superstars and a new theme song, I got some ideas that I like to share with you as soon as you send in the next chapter. Speaking of which, we have a tables match, the XCW World Television Championship will be defended in a First Blood match, and a Hardcore match for the Women's Title. There's just one more thing I want to point out on my promo on the two female combatants - Peach was named the number one contender for said title two weeks after the XCW debut, not one week. Sorry about that. Also, congrats on winning a couple awards of the Fanfiction Wrestling Awards 2013. See ya soon!
| Ninja Cato chapter 55 . 2/19
...Well, THAT'S a hell of a way to kick off a PPV! :D AWESOME from start to finish, and I loved that railing grind into the Tornado DDT spot. THAT was cool! This whole match was cool! And now, I REALLY can't wait for the next part! Still holding out on Arthur pulling off the upset. XD Update soon!
| spanky1988.aw chapter 55 . 2/17
Can't wait for chapter 56!
| DXP chapter 55 . 2/16
Wohooo! Finally at Heatwave um...
X-C-DUB! X-C-DUB! X-C-DUB!
| Emmanuel chapter 54 . 1/28
First let me say Happy New Year! Next, according to the Fiction Wrestling Multiverse Wiki, I got the number of times Sora and Peach won the Women's Championship in the companies they partake in. The Princess has held the title an impressive 11 times while the DigiDestined was close behind with 10. Guess we need a edit to the promo, huh? We await of Heatwave, XCW's version of Extreme Rules.
| Emmanuel chapter 54 . 12/9/2013
Oops, I forgot to mention this on my last review. I was too tired to type it down. It's about the XCW championships that you created. The Women's title is Betty Boop-theme, the World TV title is shaped like the Warner Bros./Lonney Tunes shield, and the World Heavyweight title has the Mickey Mouse symbol. Can you tell us what the Tag Team and Hardcore titles look like during XCW Heatwave? Thanks a lot. See you in maybe 2014!
| Emmanuel chapter 54 . 12/6/2013
Hi, I'm back with the predictions for Heatwave. Here they are:
Rolf versus Kenny (c) in a Falls Count Anywhere match for the XCW Hardcore Championship: Rolf kills Kenny for the title.
Bugs Bunny versus Hotsuma in a Tables match: Bugs attempts to Bunny Bomb Hotsuma through a table, but while on the air, the "Shinobi" counters with the spiked knuckles and then the Akujiki through a table.
Claude Speed (c) versus Arthur Read in a First Blood match for the XCW World Television Championship: Not only Arthur made Claude bleed for the title, but he somehow got a warrant for the arrest of "Liberty City's Lucifer" and the LCPD took him away, handcuff and all.
*Sora Takenouchi (c) versus Peach in a Hardcore match for the XCW Women's Championship: After a bloody and brutal duel which will be longer than the Trish Stratus/Victoria Hardcore match, Peach makes a grab for the title belt and knocks Sora down. With great ring awareness, the Women's Champion put her foot on the bottom rope before the count of three. The Princess awaits for another swing, but Sora ducks, snatches the belt from her rival, and then. . .
. . .WHAM! Peach got flat out! Sora states, "PAYBACK'S A BITCH, PEACH, AND SO ARE YOU!" before landing a Shooting Star Press from the top rope. To end, for the ladies Peach held back in the XCW locker room, including Nazz and Yuna, she put on the Crossface to retain her title.
D-Generation Ed (Ed and Ed) versus The South Park Four (Stan Marsh and Eric Cartman, c) versus The Mario Brothers (Mario and Luigi) in a Tables, Ladders and Chairs match for the XCW Tag Team Championship: Whlie D-Ed and the South Park Four are brawling or down for a while, Mario and/or Luigi silenty climb to the ladder to win the Tag Team belts.
**Tommy Vercetti versus Spongebob Squarepants in a Liberty City Street Fight: Thanks to advantage of terrain, the "Harwood Butcher" ends his losing streak.
**Tai Kamiya (c) versus Garfield in a Last Man Standing match for the XCW World Heavyweight Championship: Another epic match against bitter rivals, but in the end, Tai reigned surpeme and gained vindication.
* Match looking forward to
** Match looking forward to and you may want to add promos before the match
I really don't want a prize if win. I'm just happy to be a part of the reviews. I may consider getting an account for here, but if this website remove this story or I'm a part of the Multiverse forum, I'm afraid that they take my account away, if I did.
Have a great holiday season!
| Emmanuel chapter 54 . 12/1/2013
An choatic end to the go-home show before Heatwave! It reminds me of the closing moments to Raw Country that I still have on DVR, expect it's the big heel that prevailed. Anyway, I thank you for the input of Sora's new move. I got a good name of it. How does "Lovely Neckbreaker" sound? I hope it will give an edge against Peach at the PPV. Speaking of which, I came up with a promo for them before their bout. Check this out:
Sora Takenouchi: Bearer of the Crest of Love; married to childhood friend and Digidestined leader, Tai Kamiya; a five-time Women's Champion.
Peach Toadstool: Heir to the Mushroom Kingdom; wife of plumber, hero, and video game icon, Mario; a (insert how many)-time Women's Champion.
In the beginning of Xtreme Cartoon Wrestling, Sora survived the Battle Royal and become this company's first Women's Champion. A week later, Peach was named the number one contender for said title. Then, at XCW's first ever pay-per-view, these two had their bout. Peach defeated Sora to become the new champion, and then...
(After the match on XCW Whiplash)
Peach turns to look at her and extends her hand for a handshake. Sora looks around at the crowd, and shakes Peach's hand as the crowd applauds.
"And good sportsmanship here after a solid outing between-" Early started to say, until suddenly Peach pulled Sora closer to her and took her out with a DDT!
"OH COME ON!" Early screamed. "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?"
"Completely classless, is what it was! Peach just wanted to rub her win in Sora's face!" Shake said, disgusted.
After that incident, these two beautiful, successful, and powerful women have been at each others throats. Everytime they stepped into the ring, their dislike have reached their limit.
(After the match an XCW Endgame)
Peach turned around to see Sora standing behind her, completely incensed from all the pain and anger she felt. Sora and Peach got into a staredown in the center of the ring, each woman catching their breath. . .
. . .UNTIL SORA TOOK PEACH DOWN AND LOCKED HER IN THE CROSSFACE!
"Sora may not have won the match, but Peach disrespected her, and by God, she'll disrespect her back!"
Sora kept the hold locked in as Peach screamed in agonizing pain! The referee ordered Sora to let go of the hold, but Sora only intensified the hold, seething with absolute fury as three more referees ran down the ramp and into the ring!
"Another level of pure hatred between these two has been reached!" Early said, as the three referees stood around the submission hold in the center of the ring, upon which, Sora let go of the hold and looked down at the Women's Champion with a look of anger!
Sora's tried to end Peach's reign as champion, and while on the losing end, her determination never wavered. That it was until that one shining moment...
(Closing moments of the Triple Threat Match on XCW Nightfire)
The fans were on their feet as Sora stood up with a determined look on her face, and strode toward the corner!
"SORA NOW KNOWS WHAT'S COMING!" Early declared, as Sora climbed to the top rope.
Sora sized Peach up. . .leapt off the top rope. . .
. . .AND CONNECTED WITH THE SHOOTING STAR PRESS! Selling her chest, Sora crawled on top of Peach for the cover! 1. . .
2. . .
. . .3!
"IT'S OVER! IT'S OVER! WE'VE GOT A NEW WOMEN'S CHAMPION!" screamed Early, as Sora rolled off Peach after the bell rang!
"FOUR MONTHS AGO, SORA BECAME THE FIRST EVER XCW WOMEN'S CHAMPION, AND NOW ON THIS NIGHT, FOUR MONTHS LATER, SORA WILL WEAR THE WOMEN'S TITLE BELT FOR A SECOND TIME!" Early screamed somehow intelligibly as the referee raised Sora's arm in victory, and handed her the title belt!
It was a back and forth struggle for the richest prize of the Women's division of this company, and these two would do anything to claim it, even if it takes...
(June Week 2 of XCW Monday Night Massacre)
"I want to face you in a match with no rules. . .no disqualifications. . .and most of all. . .no mercy! Sora, I want you for the XCW Women's Championship at Heatwave. . .IN A HARDCORE MATCH!" demanded Peach.
The crowd erupted into gasps of shock as Sora finally came to a standing position.
"WHAT DO YOU SAY TO THAT?"
"I say. . .
. . .YOU'RE ON!" accpected Sora.
A rivalry six months in the making will collide in a final match on the one night where the themes of this pay-per-view are chaotic and extreme. Peach versus Sora - the Princess against the Digidestined. What would happen when two iconic ladies go hardcore, and who will walk out as XCW Women's Champion? Either way...
...none of them will be the same.
The promo ends with Sora and Peach stare each other down.
Even if I don't know how many times Peach has been champion, I say it was a good promo. I'll tell you my prediction of Heatwave and more in a few days.
| Ninja Cato chapter 54 . 11/29/2013
AWESOME! Great go-home Massacre heading into the PPV! I'm looking forward to this PPV in a big way, especially after seeing Garfield's rampage and Peach and Sora going at it! And the Chairman's appearance was nicely done as well! Now...time to predict...
Rolf vs. Kenny: Hmmmm...I'll take Rolf to get one of the belts out of SP4 control.
Bugs vs. Hotsuma: Hotsuma...mostly because I like him. XD
Claude Speed vs. Arthur: Arthur, COMPLETELY because I love him. XD XD
Sora vs. Peach: Sora to retain!
TLC Match: SP4 to retain, but just BARELY in the MOTN.
Vercetti vs. SpongeBob: Tommy Vercetti gets the duke.
Tai vs. Garfield: Tai retains in his toughest challenge to date!
Can't wait for the PPV! Update whenever you can! :D
| cornholio4 chapter 54 . 11/27/2013
| DarkDragon90 chapter 54 . 11/27/2013
Awesome chapter. Now for my first prediction here:
Rolf beats Kenny for the XCW Hardcore Championship.
I'll go with Hotsuma winning against Bugs Bunny.
I think Claude Speed will win against Arthur for the XCW Television Championship.
Sora Takenouchi will beat Peach for the XCW Women's Championship.
The South Park Four will win for the XCW Tag Team Championship.
Tommy Vercetti will beat SpongeBob Squarepants.
Tai Kamiya might beat Garfield for the XCW World Heavyweight Championship.
| Asheel chapter 54 . 11/27/2013
Rolf kills Kenny and I say "You Bastard"
The next on is a little tough to predict but, Hotsuma wins big
Claudes gonna kill Arthur
Sora beats Peach
South Park 4 win Match of the night
The next is the hardest to predict. I'm going with Spongebob because he's such a awesome heel and he would get some huge heat.
Tai defy's odds and Garfield doesn't lose any image/overness because it's a last man standing match.
| Ninja Cato chapter 53 . 11/17/2013
Great show so far, Ivan! :D I'm loving the tag team scene right now, and TLC at Heatwave is slated to be an epic clash between three near-legendary teams! And I don't know who's on an angrier rampage right now - Claude or Garfield. O_O Maybe Tommy Vercetti's rampage will surpass both of theirs, which'd mean bad news for the Sponge. XD Either way, those guys are looking mighty scary headed into their PPV bouts, so well done there too! Can't wait to see what happens in the second hour!
| Asheel chapter 53 . 11/16/2013
Johnny lost...I'm about to "No" chant and rip of Claude. Spongebob is XCW's best heel
| Emmanuel chapter 52 . 10/9/2013
Only one word can be describe XCW's very first Supershow...
Sorry, I have got to get that out of my system. Anyway, I've been a fan of this wrestling story a few months ago, and I haven't reviewed...until now. If you may, I have names for the signature moves of some of the wrestlers.
First, for Mario and Luigi's triple rolling suplex, I dub them "3-Up", of the Life Mushrooms from the video game.
Next, Tai and Sora's triple German suplex will be called the "Kamiya San." San is three in Japanese.
Sora has a new move which is a running somersault neckbreaker, but I don't know what to called it. My two picks are Soaring Heart and Heartstopper. Do you have any names for it?
Lastly, Tai's latest finisher, the brainbuster, is good, but I rather go for the late great Mitsuharu Misawa's Emerald Flowsion Kai (check out the versions of the Emerald Flowsion on YouTube) in which Tai calls "Digi-flow-ution". And from the top rope the Super/Avalanche Emerald Flowsion Kai known as "Warp Digi-flow-ution". What do you think about them? It's OK if you don't want to use them, because it's your story and I don't to mess it up since it is so awesome with or without my input.
Lastly, Arthur does have a last name and it was Read (ironic, but true). You need your rest after a great show. See your next chapter!
Oh, one more thing, when will you update "Destined"?