|Reviews for Hunters equilibrium|
| DreamixAngel chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Hiya! I like the idea, but the punctuation could use some work. Also, I thought Corona's spider is Venus, not Ventus... Is that my mistake or yours? Also, if this is the first chapter, unmark it as complete or else this counts as a oneshot.
Also, some more detail will improve this a lot. Anyway, update soon!
| none sorry5 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
good so far but a bit try making it a bit longer or more detailed