Reviews for The Call
Devil Of Fate chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
So if Dagomon is involved what became of Demon? Are they working together? Has Dagomon promised to get Demon out of the Dark Ocean if he does what he wants? Poor Hikari, Vamdemon or the Dark Ocean, some kind of darkness is always after the poor girl, hopefully they can stop it for good this time.

Anyway this is really well written, and I like how the Digimon aren't statues that are literally just there to fight like they are in some stories. All the characters are well, in character. I really want to know who this guy is now, he seems to have everything so well planned out. Hopefully the Children manage to throw some spanners in the works of his plan. I hate it when villain plans always work out flawlessly. Just makes them that much more arrogant.
Devil Of Fate chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
The Dark ocean has made the first move. That is all the Chosen Children know. I am curious about this Digimon similar to Chimeramon, could it be Milleniumon as he is a fusion of Chimeramon and MugenDramon. This dark individual who visited Hikari and Ken also sparks my curiosity, is he simply darkness or a dark Digimon taking human form to speak to them or is he something akin to what Gennai is except the Dark Ocean equivalent.

I agree with your complaints about fanfiction however as many horrible stories as I've encountered on this site. Those select few gems that shine above the rest more than make up for them. I'm sensing a very character/story driven story here. Of course nothing's wrong with that, it will simply be interesting to see how you handle it and if you do incorporate Digimon battles I'd like to see how you'd do it. Can't wait to find out more as I read on.
Lucre Jaq chapter 6 . 1/16/2012
Wow, this is going great! You definitely have the skills of a writer. I just wish more people would take the time write something as worthwhile as this...
crestoflight3 chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
Okay, I'm not going to do the review where you repeat what happened and mentioned all the good/interesting parts...I sometimes do that, but it's kind of counterproductive...

As can be expected, your writing is superb, the idea (as I think I mentioned in the last review) is intriguing, and you're offering plenty of side plots to add to the overall story. I'm going to read the next chapter now...
crestoflight3 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
First of all, I respect your initial condemning of Fanfiction as a whole. I agree, a lot of the authors on here ruin the story by putting random things together. However, I think most people that like books-or movies, as the case may be-like to think back on what happened, and Fanfiction provides a perfect outlet for such wonderings; however, not every random idea should be published online...

This opening-what can I say? Your writing is excellent, the idea (what I can see of it, anyway) intriguing. This already looks amazing; all I can really say is that I want to read more. I hope you upload your next chapter soon, and that you don't get too annoyed with Fanfiction to stop until this is over!
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