Blimey, Ken and Davis' peril continues...

I guess the peril that Davis and Ken are in ain't any better either.

What could Yolei and Kari have encountered? I guess I'm about to see soon...

Looks like T.K. and Cody are still in trouble.

Still wonder who this "Dark Man" is, in a good way. He reminds me a bit of Xehanort for Kingdom Hearts.

I wonder what plans Sato Katsu has in mind for Kari...

Hmm, at least you don't describe the murders in that brief dream sequence in so much great gory details, that's a plus for you. :)

Ooo, another meeting of our villains...

Woah, three action-packed scenes for the price of one. Nice.

Another short and sweet chapter, not much else to say really.

At this point, I've actually realised that your chapters are somewhat short for what I thought was going to be a big epic. I mean it's not a bad thing, it's just something I've noticed. Anyways, good action, good dialogue, like the Kari character, good so far. :)

Good action here, not rushed nor dragged.

I see T.K. and Cody aren't in any better situation either.

Cool, back to seeing Kari again. _

Pretty nice and cool to see Ken and Davis share some chemistry. Never really recalled them actually interacting often in the series itself. Good work so far.

The team are splitting up? Blimey, now I really wondering what's going to happen next?

Also, I guess this "Sato Katsu" character's a OC of yours, right?