|Reviews for In Confidence|
| Runecutter chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
Whow that's one fine piece of writing.
The dialogues and the characters doubts and worries come along so clearly it's seldom to read so good a prose on these pages. And up to a point about two thirds in the development also is very realistic and believable... then it somewhat degrades into a bit too much of foreplay to work with the two people you chose to write about... none of them would go for a quick tumble in the hay after just having discovered the joy of snogging their best friend, that's more than just OOC, that's irrecognizable "characters"... Although even those scenes are decently written and hold back on the language so it stays classy and sensible.
To be honest, the best bit about this story is that it completely avoids the standard clichés for the "falling for Harmony" story like potions being involved in their formerly entertained crushes... You show brilliantly how that isn't necessary, how it can be just natural blindness to the person right besides you, while you are looking for somebody that might be able to electrify you just by the right look or smile. Kudos for that!
There's only one thing missing in this little tale (as fun as it is for a proud "card carrying" Harmonian as myself to read) which is the reaction of the other people around them to this new development... will Ron recognize what he lost through his immature actions? Will he be sour about it? What will Ginny do? Will they for once gain the acceptance and support they'd have deserved throughout so much more of the series than they both got?
Personally i think the moment Ron took Lavender as "girlfriend" just to spite both Ginny and Hermione was one of the best confirmations, that while he may THINK that he has a crush on Ms Granger, he really sees her more as the big sister he needs to impress with his behavior and wants the acceptance of, i never bought into the whole BS about URST and them both only squabbling because they could not get fast enough to the shagging... True, Ron may have grown into a physically more impressive specimen than about any other Gryffindor in his age span, but his behavior and tendency to fall into cholerical rants about the smallest things should more than offset this "advantage" and repulse not just Hermione but more or less any girl that isn't deaf and spends any time close to him at all... So all hail to this story for making Hermione wake up early enough and find a better choice to treat her well :) And the way it's written only makes it better.
| Cateagle chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Things are definitely developing nicely, here. I do hope they develop quite a bit further. *wicked chuckle* 'Twould be most amusing if the attempts of the two youngest Weasleys to inspire jealousy in these two instead brought these two together and total cut the red-heads out.
This reader is very definitely looking forward to more.
| RonRR chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
A nice story, a little rushed a the end though.
I think you could leave this story here as complete. What happens next may be better left untold. Harry and Hermoine completed thier journey to discovering thier feeling about each other and that is what this story was about.
Thanks for writing,
| Rori Potter chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Wow. Write more!
| HeWhoEscapesReality chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
You my good sir, need to update. Excellent beginning.
| Quackpotty chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Nice start, and I look forward to more. Thanks!
| kidneysrgood chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I'm looking forward to reading you continue this. Well done, keep it up.
| Rawr Olivia Grace chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Please tell me you are gonna update! Please!
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Good story idea.
| Monarck chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Thank god. A Harry/Hermione written decently and with some potential. The ship has gotten so bad quality wise that I was giving up hope on a good fic popping up.
Update soon. It was a great read.
| Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
A good start to a 6th year story of Harry and Hermione discovering how much they meant to each other. When the door opened to the room of requirement, Harry was shocked to see the Hogwarts Library. Where else would Hermione want to be.
Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.
| irishdaddy0204 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
In the immortal words of Oliver Twist:
"Please sir, may I have more?"
| codyw1 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Very good so far (is this continuing?). Pretty hot too lol!
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
awesome story _
| CrystalYuriKim chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Love the start of the story!