|Reviews for Melancholia|
| kfoll chapter 15 . 1/11/2013
Oh so because he calls out Bella's name when he comes that means we should feel sorry for him?
This guy is pretty despicable really! After what he did to Bella he shouldn't be thinking about moving to Forks. Rubbing her face in it with his perfect, happy little family. He should be staying away. Wouldn't be a story then I suppose.
| FFFan1664 chapter 15 . 1/11/2013
| Kgunter34 chapter 15 . 1/11/2013
He is a big mess. And he needs to grow a pair and stand up to his parents. Great chapter.
| helenemc chapter 15 . 1/11/2013
Love this chapter from Edward's point of view. What a sad existence. I feel a little better knowing that he is suffering.
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/28/2012
I hate that Edward has a child with another woman. Their soul will always be joined in this child. In this life and in the next. Bella will never be one and only, she will never be the most important, she will aways be in second place.
| helenemc chapter 14 . 12/27/2012
I don't recall, but did Bella's daughter also have green eyes? Poor Bella.
| kfoll chapter 14 . 12/27/2012
Frustrated that Bella and Edward didn't talk. Bella's heart is about to break all over again now. Now that she realises that Edward has the daughter and hers died. Cruel. I hope Edward really suffers for what he did to her! She didn't even get to keep her baby and he did! Seems really unfair. He doesn't deserve the happiness of a family. I want to see Edward brought to his knees. I want to see him suicidal with guilt and grief. Can we see that soon please. I don't think I can wait this long between chapters.
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/27/2012
This is the longest wait ever for one of your chapters. Are you planning any updates soon. So disappointing to keep looking only to get nothing!
| helenemc chapter 13 . 10/30/2012
I wonder if the paper Edward was holding was the letter that Bella released with the balloon. If so, that would explain his question and his behavior.
| Kgunter34 chapter 13 . 10/30/2012
Mmmm, I am guessing that the child he has been raising is not his. Great chapter.
| kfoll chapter 13 . 10/30/2012
What's been happening with Edward then? My God he's going to suffer when he finds out about Peyton. Good, I want to see him suffer!
Getting a chapter from you is so bitter sweet. I love this story but I now know it's going to be weeks and weeks 'til the next one.
| content1 chapter 13 . 10/30/2012
You are killing me with the angst between them - but in all the right ways. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Kgunter34 chapter 12 . 9/29/2012
I know someone that does this every year since her child died. It's a beautiful way to remember. Great chapter.
| helenemc chapter 12 . 9/20/2012
Thank you for updating. I am happy to see Bella feeling a little lighter. Garrett is good for her right now.
| kfoll chapter 12 . 9/20/2012
It's called backstory! You have to set it up before you can get down to the nitty gritty! Don't listen to rants about there not being enough E&B in your tale. I have faith that you're going to tell the right story. Some readers can't cope with any other pairing but E&B, no matter how much of a bastard Edward has been they still want them together.
Bellas pain is palpable and is only going to get worse when Edward is more on the scene. She has to confront him though. She needs to hash the whole thing out with him, tell him about Peyton.
I think long gaps between chapters is what the problem is here. That is why people feel it is dragging a bit. you have a life though and I, for one, am greatful for anything you can give us.