Reviews for Return of the Shur'tugal
Guest chapter 32 . 4/16
Thank you for creating this story
Guest chapter 48 . 3/28
So where's the last chapter you were talking about, it's been three years
Guest chapter 17 . 3/23
Urgralgra not urgala, urgala sounds like arugula
Eeveecat1248 chapter 48 . 1/19/2016
Please post the next chapter!
Eeveecat1248 chapter 5 . 1/18/2016
Awww
Aeron chapter 22 . 12/1/2015
Since I started reading I have thought that you should look over your work to check for mistakes, as I seem to see one at least once in every five lines. Other than that I love it, the story is good and I like what you have done with the characters.
inuyasha.lover33 chapter 48 . 1/6/2015
I love your story! After I finished the Eragon series I was really sad, but your story has those feelings that I miss and you made me experience again, thank you :)
Guest chapter 48 . 11/18/2014
This is an amazing story and I respect you greatly, don't stop doing what you like an never let life take you down.
MegKY chapter 48 . 10/15/2014
It's beautiful! I love the ending, it wasn't hanging at all because we know of the bright future ahead of them and endless possibilities. Thank you for not abandoning the story despite all you have gone true, you are a writer to the heart. Be well and take care of yourself! The characterization is perfect only with minor inconsistencies like how eragon and the dragonriders become vulnerable to Orrin's soldiers when they are highly skilled and experienced in fighting. I love how you imply things between Arya and Eragon that would otherwise be ruined if written elaborately. Thank you for this amazing story and may the stars watch over you.
Spitfire0 chapter 48 . 10/4/2014
Good chapter, though I was surprised to see Nasuada give up the throne. I'm sorry this story is coming to an end, but stories can't go on forever.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 48 . 10/2/2014
The Queen is thinking of retiring?
Can't say that I blame her. XDD
slythian chapter 48 . 10/1/2014
Awesome chapter waiting for next one
Scrawl the Penguin chapter 48 . 9/29/2014
Why dose my post say Guest?

Any ways great chapter and thanks for your work.

Scrawl-the-Penguin 9-30-14
Guest chapter 47 . 9/25/2014
In my post earlier I got the date wrong today's date is 9-26-14
Guest chapter 47 . 9/25/2014
GIVE ME MOREEEEEEE. I LOVE THIS STORY ITS WELL THOUGHT OUT AND WELL WRITEN. GIVE ME MORE, EASY THE ACHING OF MY TORTURED SOUL. IN THIS WORLD OF FANFICTION THERE ARE SO MANY WHO STEP FOOT ON THE PATH OF THE WRITER BUT THEN FALL ASTRAY ALONG THE ROAD TO COMPLETION. I BEG OF YOU KEEP YOUR MUSE ON A LEASH SO SHE MAY CONTINUE TO PROVIDE YOU WITH INSPIRATION FOR THIS BRILLIANT STORY. IN MY LIFE I HAVE READ COUNTLESS FANFICTION STORIES BUT ONLY A FEW STAND OUT AND THIS IS ONE OF THEM. ONE OF THE OTHERS DISAPPEARED WHEN THEY CLOSED THE SHURTAGLE FAFICTION WEB SITE. WHILE THE OTHER ONE'S AUTHOR JUST GAVE UP. AGIN I BESEECH THEE DO NOT GIVE UP, YOU MOST FIGHT ON AND CONTINUE TO WRITE

SCRAWL-THE-PENGUIN 9-15-14
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