|Reviews for Emperor of Zero|
| Roku - Molester of Science chapter 27 . 12/20/2015
| ManwithaPlan113 chapter 27 . 12/19/2015
The greatest twist in history. He...he was the spy all along...
| So you want to be an Author chapter 16 . 12/7/2015
What's up with all the "heck"s? Or the "bull" for that matter? I feel like I'm Reading a serious history book and suddenly stumbling about something like "And then, President Lincoln said to his advisers and generals: "Yo dogs! We going to pawn them or what? YOLO dudes!"
That is to say, your portrayal of Bonaparte is fairly spotty and inconsistent at points, but I can mostly ignore it for the sake of what is a good story. Unfortunately, "heck" just completly blows up SoD...
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
hmm interesting but very true if they backed him from the begining then they are equally guilty.
| Enlightened Middle C chapter 48 . 11/21/2015
What is this endless treachery? It seems that Napoleon is dead set on conquering Halkeginia, but he hasn't been using any Earth technology(where is teh airplanes and bombs), even though he has rallied so much support(Even though probably all of that support is willing to abandon him at the drop of a hat). At least private development isn't far from his grasp, with his brief title of General that gave him a hefty salary despite being a commoner(Was 100 the entirety of his salary? I don't think it should be). Honestly, is it beyond him so far to synthesize gaseous poisons to cripple his enemies? Because I'm pretty sure you said that the plane gave him like all the knowledge of World War 1 at the very least, when planes and poison gas were starting to see combat usage, or may not have if I got my facts wrong.
Also, why isn't he conducting any internal improvements by using his knowledge of future technology, such as trains, which would make supply trains so much easier and would move along the economy in areas under his control?
Also, it's been over a year. Please tell me you haven't left this hanging off.
| Paktu chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
Keep it up I would love to know what happens next, the way you write is an interesting style, I try to replicate it in order to spice up my own dull, no depth fanfiction.
| Guest chapter 48 . 11/4/2015
If possible, could you find a way to work a Halgengekian version of Scandinavia into this story? As Familiar of Zero seems to be devoid of any northern European country.
| Guest02842086S chapter 40 . 11/2/2015
Y'know if even 0.1% of naruto-ff's was written with this amount of politicing and backroom deals and GoT-whatchamcallit... theey would actually portrait a paranoid, cloack-and-dagger, shinobi society.
And here we are in Mirror-Potter-Country where everything a problem should be "KILL IT WITH FIRE", because we CAN, and you make it a polit-thriller.
Gorram, I like and hate this story.
| Guest24785602D chapter 39 . 11/2/2015
I like explosions and want, really, really, want to see this powde- no this Messines explode.
| Guest29756242S chapter 37 . 11/2/2015
Every time I think I have him figured out...
Excellent job keeping your readers on their toes.
| Guest02385602S chapter 34 . 11/2/2015
Sometimes I wonder what Napoleon would've done if he had a copy of Sun Tsu's "The Art of War.".
| Guest24560256D chapter 30 . 10/30/2015
Now that a killsteal if I ever have seen one. Heh, wonder how that corsic bastard will react.
| Guest90286502D chapter 27 . 10/30/2015
HOLY! FUCKING! GAME OF THRONES!
What a fukken, utterly brilliant, utterly dastardly bastard.
PS: I groan at the idiocy of manga-infused magician-logic (and here I thought Potter had it bad). Why in all thirteen hells the princess didn't use her tornado-magic THEN? WHYYYYYYY!
| Guest23765926D chapter 23 . 10/30/2015
Gah! I hate this spy-doublespy-counterspy shit.
| Guest29735629D chapter 21 . 10/30/2015
With which trope do you decide to continue?
Hm, difficult quetion that is.
"Escalate quickly that did" or "hit the fan the shit does"?