|Reviews for Help|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31
Well ur an ok writer but obviously misinterpreted how Caroline is supposed to be portrayed and if you still watch Elena has slept with more people then Caroline including both brothers whereas Caroline just wants love but u must not like vampire diaries that much if you can't see the true characters faults and personality.
| sharbour0108 chapter 1 . 4/9
It would be interesting to see how you would change your story from what actually happened.
| cookiesrforme chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
LOL I sooooo agree with the Klaroline thing. Please keep writing Klena stories even though Klaroline happened. You're a great writer and there's practically no serious Klena stories out there :P.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
I do think you are a little harsh on Caroline, but S1 Caroline needed attention from the boys because she never got it from her mum and dad. She was desperate to earn approval, yet her parents rarely acknowledged her. I agree w/ you there
I really like Klaroline scenes. I like the symmetry - bad guy falling for good girl (all very Captain Swan from once upon a time)
There was a point to this. I have now forgotten it.
| Physie Remangason chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
love this cant wait for more
| LilBlondeRikku chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I read your review on another story (which is how I found you, and this one) where you said she'd plagiarized you. I don't see it. The confrontation between Elena and Stefan happened in the show, so she didn't copy that from you. Going over the side of the bridge, maybe, but I've seen that in a few fics I've read so far, so I doubt it. And honestly, if I were writing something coming off from this scene, I'd probably have Elena stay by the bridge, too. It's a good storyline. Just sayin'.
However, I do think you can write extremely well and I dislike that you have so many one shots, especially this one. This has the potential to be a great story, if you continue it. Which you really, really should. What happens next? Definitely something to consider.
| 4everEllen chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
| Lexi chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I love your fanfcs!
| CrazySue05 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
A follow up to this would be just delicious. He goes and saves Caroline, then comes back and...what?
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
I really liked this! xD
| Meb chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
| KnightOwl416 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
I'd like to see a series with this storyline. I like that he came for her after what Stephan did to her.
| Cassie-D1 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
You totally read my mind. I mean Caroline has been almost everywhere. While the main character has really only been with ONE guy. That's not right. I love Klena
| Orichidee chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Eine wunderbare Geschichte!Schreibe doch weiter.