|Reviews for The Rising Phoenix|
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/12/2016
Just FYI if you dont know it by now but it's "DEFINITELY" as in 1000% certainty. "DEFIANTLY" means going against order or rule, jesus christ, I don't want to be rude but you as a writer have (in a great story btw) made the same mistake quite a few times or so I believe without any change over time it seems and the only reason I'm saying this here and not the next chapter is because I wouldnt be able to review again until after.
| Le Sigh chapter 4 . 9/4/2016
So much potential, so very very lost
Poor, poor characterisation
Illogical actions & decisions
Mundane dialogue, robotic reactions
Plotholes upon plotholes
And the saddest part? Such a perfect setting, such a good opportunity and so much much potential. All irrecoverably lost.
Many a great passionate ideas, all heartlessly butchered away
Lesson from the story: How to produce great ideas and then Not execute them properly.
(Oh and Voldemort only ever meant to make SIX Horcruxes. He just wanted to split his Soul into Seven as it is a powerful magical number. The Seventh piece of his soul would be his own body/self. Harry was an unknown & unwanted mistake. He made Nagini into his last horcrux sometime around Harry's fourth year to complete his magical 7 split without knowing Harry had already taken place as his 6th horcrux)
| darthtenebrosius chapter 47 . 2/28/2016
Loved your story, it was an amazingly original take on dimension traveling.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
The good guys are a little too unimaginative in their spell selections, huh?
Given how desperate their situation is, don't you think they should AKs fly instead of stupid Stupefies?
| Healed535 chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
I'm intrigued. These stories where Harry is pulled into an alternate dimension are my favorites! I've never seen one where Ginny goes also, so I'm pretty excited to see where this goes.
| Tamzi.k chapter 47 . 6/6/2015
Dis story is reaaly awsmm...
And I m definitely waitng for a sequel...
Please write a sequel of dis story...
U r a talented writer nd u bring on d entertainment in d story...
| tanithlipsky chapter 47 . 4/23/2015
| nire47 chapter 46 . 4/21/2015
I kinda wondered how Ron kept track of his wife. There were 2 Hermione Grangers in the battle.
| nire47 chapter 45 . 4/21/2015
That battle was ferocious! Loved every tense moment of it.
I played 'This is War' from 30 Seconds to Mars while reading this chapter.
| nire47 chapter 42 . 4/20/2015
You give such great description of the battles. Excellent!
| Simianpower chapter 9 . 4/19/2015
Wow, your "heroes" are even worse than terrorists. They blow shit up at random, and then DON'T kill their enemies but rather almost curse their friends. I'm done. There's a reason the "good guys" lost in your world: they're too stupid to win. I said this on Chapter 1, and I'll say it again now: you don't win a *war* by punching out enemies that will torture you to death if the positions were reversed. This story is unreadable because the good guys are too stupid.
| nire47 chapter 19 . 4/18/2015
I really like these broadcasts.
| Simianpower chapter 6 . 4/18/2015
If Harry's 22, as mentioned a few chapters ago, then he dueled Riddle way more than 2 years ago. More like 4-5 years ago. Unless you're changing that bit of canon, which hasn't been mentioned anywhere...
| nire47 chapter 3 . 4/16/2015
I forgot how much I like this story.
| Simianpower chapter 2 . 4/14/2015
This is retarded. Stupefy? Really? They've lost a WAR, not just a few schoolyard skirmishes, and a free shot at Bellatrix's back is wasted on a stunner? These people deserve their fates. And Voldemort using a tripping jinx and some "really dark" pain curse rather than a killer? Badly written chapter, not worth continuing. Sorry.