Reviews for Girl On The Screen
Murphy AT chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Good. Very good.
zoe alice chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
I was a bit skeptical on the concept, but I ended up liking it. The grammar could be cleaned up, but overall very nice.
AKs-on-show chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Some little things that could be fixed with a pretty easy beta-read (although if that isn't the pot calling the kettle black on my part, I don't know what it is), like one "you're" instead of "your", and some hyphens that should be dashes, some full stops at the end of spoken sentences that should be commas, but other than that, bloody brilliant. Tone, pitch, everything about it just sat well with me. I really like the passing visual, painful crush thing, cos god knows we've all been through that. As always, love your pieces. Hope you don't mind if I favourite you.
madis hartte chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
This is really good. A fitting ending.
The Hobbit's Rhapsody chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Really interesting. You're a good writer, and I love this expansive, complexifying take on such a minor character. I will also admit that I've seen this episode a few times and wondered if any of the other passengers spotted Rose calling for the Doctor. This is really intriguing; I like it a lot.