Reviews for I love you
Rainshadow999 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Great Starclan! I didn't know that's how Nightcloud felt! Still, they are together… You have to admit, they go well together. Nightcloud doesn't say much in the stories.
Fireflame 's chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
How sweet
Emberheart of BlazeClan chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
That's beautiful! It gave me a whole new look at Nightcloud! Love this!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
nice
Riversong42 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This was awesome. Deep and emotional. You never really think how Nightcloud feels.
R41NBOW-RUMPUS chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Wow, this is really well-written. The only thing I could find was when you repeated 'I love you' and 'Longing' you didn't put a full stop after them.

And when Nightcloud asked 'Is it because of Leafpool' it nds an exclemation mark instead of a full stop. It seemed like a question to me, so I was confused.

Overall, great job! :) It's a really good fic.

Song
Tallstar07 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
that was good. i loved it!
Rain's Song chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Amazing! :) Well written, fantastic idea, and wonderfully executed!
xXDreamQueenXx chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Even though Nightcloud is mean,I felt sorry for her
Walking in moonlight chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
this is really good
SparrowKeeper chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Wow...this fanfic was truly sad. To be honest I love Nightcloud. She's so misunderstood; all she's ever wanted was Crowfeather to return her love in affection. There are a few mistakes, but nothing too big. ;D

I really enjoyed it.

Sparrow