Reviews for Fear, Not Love
Annie chapter 6 . 4/9/2012
I really love this fic and it's a shame that you're losing momentum on it. May I suggest that if you're losing your muse you watch episodes with plenty of Steve/Kono interaction or reading other fics on the pairing, it might help. I hope you gain momentum again soon as I'm keen to read more!
christinaxa chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
Oh my, another hot chapter, Merl! Such a busy couple we've got here, having sex all over the place. But I can totally see them doing that just; their personalities go right along with it. I like how you also dug a little bit into Kono's feelings, I'm definitely looking forward to more of their insights on their new "relationship."

I don't really have a specific prompt or suggestion, but I'm assuming that this is taking place while Lori is still on the team right? (Around episode 15). So maybe you could write something from the governor's ball they attended in episode 16? I thought Steve and Kono looked so good in their outfits, shame that they didn't have any scenes alone.
sphekie chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
So does chin & Danny know Steve/kono r together? Awesome chapter by the way, I can't get enough of them too.
Nienna Tinehtele chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
That was hot! lol and there doesn't need to be a special reason for writing know you always have readers who will read it. Loved it!
francis2 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
Phew, hot! I so envy Kono right now. I guess Danny and Chin will have a field day finding them like this.
bushy4 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
Great chapter. Very hot and I loved it! I love anything you write

A small idea for a one shot

What if Steve and Kono had a bet over drinks that they can get anyone they wanted in the bar. Jealousy insues and then they figure out they want each other.
sky chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
just one word HOT
Ghostrider chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
Very hot scenes these last two chapters ;-)

As for your muse, hmmm, let me think...

Don't know how you feel about Tony Archer, but what about a bit with him and Kono as they go out to talk to the lady in the last episode? Or Tony and Steve, maybe Danny, on the boat at the end? He DID offer to be their Yenta/Mother Hen, didn't he? Not to mention the fact he's Old Style New Yawk. I shudder to think of what would happen if Tony and Joe ever meet up. It'd be much like Grumpy Ol' McGarrett and Williams. Imagine Steve and Danny watching that, Chin shaking his head, smiling that small smile of his, Kono helplessly snorting and Doc wondering if the space-time continuum somehow has inverted back on itself (I think)
cm757 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
so maybe you've lost a little momentum on this fic. You know what, who cares? It's still a beautiful story, amazingly written, and it's still hot as hell. So keep working on it, because I'll tell you what, we're all gonna be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Great work ;)
TvFanatic97 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
I'm glad that you continued from the last chapter because I wanted to see whether they'd be in an awkward morning after situation but they most definitely were not ;) if you have lost momentum on this fic then I'm happy with waiting with no updates until you get your muse! Update soon please (if possible).
teenycee chapter 6 . 3/9/2012
Sidalee chapter 6 . 3/9/2012
Wow, that was super hot yet very tasteful at the same time. I like Kono's easygoing acceptance about they altered relationship and bonus points for her wearing Steve's clothes.

I love this fic.
poisonedship chapter 5 . 3/5/2012
This wasn't the last chapter, was it? I hope there's more.
francis2 chapter 5 . 3/3/2012
This was all kinds of awesome.
sphekie chapter 5 . 2/27/2012
Yes! Steve finally get his!

So glad u post this chapter up...this story is amazing and the scene w/Steve & kono was intensely HOT! ;)

Thanks for ur chapter! Keep up with u good work!
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