|Reviews for Through The Fire|
| Matan Nawi chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Nice story, and a very good exacution of convaying your own version of a fixed plot.
I found the kiss in the end rather awkward but what the hell it works better than letting him tag team and ending with him dead.
I'd really love to read more of this in the future and I hope you'll release more chapters soon.
as a side note however you might just want to know that trying to stop a case of poisening like that is acctually more likely to get you either with two dead bodies, an amputated limb (which reminds me you didn't remove the tarniqute) or bleeding pretty bad from cutting yourself up.