|Reviews for Lost Cause|
| chey chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Let me guess, the song is lost cause - by imagine dragons...yes?
| Mi herido diario chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
me encanta *0* pon continuación
| Midnight Promise chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
. . .Please tell me you are continuing this story. Love Jason - good baseline of things. Excited for more! :)
| Jubei-Kazuki chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
I like your story and I'd know if you will udapte another chapter or not ?
What's happen to Jason ?
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
WOAH i was totally tricked at the beginning! Man This just ups the awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter ;A;
| Chaseha-Wing chapter 2 . 3/16/2012
Amnesia from a neck wound? Also how did drugs get into his system? Least I recalled, Nightwing and Robin didn't have air filters on so there couldn't have been anything in the smoke. And Batman does not use chemical warfare so...This makes no sense. It's possible that he went into shock and while half asleep he doesn't remember things clearly, but it actually doesn't add up. Nice work, good symptoms, but how could drugs have gotten into his system? Did something happen AFTER he was knocked out, because that's the only thing I can think of.
| Pheonix2125 chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
lol Jason was high XD that cracked me up. loved the chapter!
| Soului chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Loved this! Is there any chance of you writing a sequel. I would love to see what happens next.
| just-O chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Amazing fight scene! Hope you continue this. It was fantastic.
| shells210 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
No idea what song you used, I just know that so far I love this story!
| OpenMindedCranberry chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Me Against the World.
By: Simple Plan
Can't wait for the next update. Some lines were a bit cheesy, but it's a songfic so who cares?
Don't take any offense from anything in this review. My opinion is pointless to yours because you are the author and you have the control.
| annie2013 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
me against the world?
| anon chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
In Kingdom Come the "Newbloods" obviously took it too far but as they say it was them who put down Ra's al Ghul and Eclipso (some villains do need to be stopped permanently they keep breaking out of prison and butchering innocents the only reason they haven't put down the Joker I can figure is that the DCverse is the type of place someone like the Joker would break out of Hell and probably bring an army of demons to do his bidding) and they had new worse villains like the Slaughter Brigade to deal with, this is probably why the older heroes didn't step in until the "Newbloods" crossed the line, in a dark world heroes can be dark, but after they kill the villains, they have to stop if they still want to fight each other got to the middle of the desert not cities
Don't get me wrong lethal force should be used if and only if all other means are exhausted or unavailable to save lives or stop villains, I certainly don't want them slitting the throats of every single thug they come across (you do that you stop being a hero and become Frank Castle) if only it could be an uncercover cop doing his or her job
What Bats does is worse than killing it's psychological crippling
The “Newbloods” spent their whole lives in terror of these villains, they see the older generation as ineffective, although again it should not apply to average thugs
Ironically Luthor is the reason Metropolis has such a high standard of living, his inventions and leadership got it out of near fatal poverty, (he’s from the Suicide Slums of Metropolis) and he does such for the rest of the country as well, and as president eliminated the national debt, brought unemployment to almost zero, it was HIS leadership that got us through two alien invasions and even the heroes must admit without it, we would have fallen
I will always prefer villains who at least have a point and frighteningly may even be right about everyone being better off under their benevolent dictatorship (of course make education great so the common man does know what is best for him and his children's children and democratic republicanism can work) like Ra's al Ghul if the environment isn't brought into balance no matter the means or cost the future for the human race will be worse than any dystopian fiction and will lead to the extinction of the human race not through misadventure but suicide through stupidity or Lex Luthor who as he says if he was calling all the shots could end famine and cure cancer and he could his mind is capable of anything perhaps give everyone ultra high-tech non polluting technology and maybe even superpowers (without the White Martians ancient experiments all humanity would be like the Kryptonians or Daxamites) lead humanity and the rest of the universe to unimaginable glory remember Red Son he united all humanity and led us to a golden age that lasted millions of years, no poverty, disease, war, crime, terrorism, or environmental problems and science and art advance, he’s about the advancement of the human race by any means necessary it’s not that he’s a good man he’s not but he’s right about most things he’s too smart not to be
A lot of villains seem unaware that if they used their mind and/or other talents for legitimate business causes or the government could be far more profitable than any crime spree
Luthor has fanatical Nietzschean beliefs, that Superman undermines humanity’s worth and accomplishments
Of course vigilantes can be sanctimonious hypocrites judging others and letting themselves go unscrutinized condemning others when they do the same thing for less reasons I think it is disgusting they don't share their scientific breakthroughs (of course inventors should be well compensated) with the scientific specifically medical community or their skills with law enforcement agencies far more good than beating up thugs and psychos fight crime at its source ignorance and poverty. I realize due to rarity and complexity mass production may not always be possible or at least cost effective and due to difficulty not all could take brutal training but a little bit could go a very, very long way. A hero doesn’t just save people a hero teaches the people to take care of themselves. The ability to think of future generations when calculating pragmatic utilitarianism is what separates us from the animals. The world is not the way it is because of thugs and psychopaths, corrupt businessmen/politicians (which contrary to fiction are the exception not the rule) but because most people are too stupid to know what is best for them the extreme left and extreme right get caught up in their ideals and refuse to acknowledge brutal facts of reality no real world understanding of the extreme complexities of politics, economics, technological logistics, and how they’re all interconnected in the long run. People want everything right here right now the whole world just handed to them on a silver platter think just by complaining something will happen without a tangible plan. Such a plan will require a lot of long, hard, boring work all day every day for generations.
There will always be some exploitation, the best and brightest will elevate themselves over the common man, it’s nature, best for the species, it improves the standard of living of the human race as a whole, as long as they don’t kill anyone or otherwise actively oppress, free trade and enterprise is the only thing that has ever led to long lasting meaningful peace
I'm glad the government has Suicide Squad, Cadmus, Checkmate, the Elite, Amanda Waller, and the new female Spy Smasher, Cameron Chase I don’t think there is anything wrong with wanting accountability from Superheroes, having checks and balances on these living breathing weapons of mass destruction seems quite reasonable to me, one will go left when they should go right and innocent people will die it WILL happen, not saying black ops don’t have their necessity, they can be used as a force of good
Have you heard of The Boys
Say you’re Harry Truman do you drop the bombs or do you drown the home islands in the blood of U.S. Marines, BATMAN has no answer to that question, people hire soldiers so they never have to use moral courage themselves
| SherlockXHolmes23 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.
| Jubei-Kazuki chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
(Sorry for my bad english but I'm French XD).
I love your story. Ah, Jason is the best .
Another chapter soon ?