Reviews for Territory
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1
Dont like that edward isn't her first dom. Whore.
cookie158 chapter 1 . 2/25
I WANT MOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEE
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
yea babe
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
I really love this. Can you put another chapter from edward's point of view.
Ennah1887 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
More!
newborntwifan chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
well. that was interesting! my first piss story! ;) More interesting than I expected. Thanks for breaking me in on that.
Welcome2MyWorldxoxo chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Loved it! Hoping for me
SickHornybabe chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
It was hot. Please continue. And include more of the watersports. Maybe on her breasts this time... I would really like if you show that she's moaning in enjoyment during the act...
Bellacullen16 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Alright, Though i wouldn't personally do it, it was definitely hot. I REALLY want more.
DuckiBelle chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
That is a great one-shot!
Dil9 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Although it's out of my comfort zone you've written it beautifully.
Edward's spouse chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
excellent story.
Analitica chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
i loved it! I WANT MORE THAT WAS SO HOT!
feja chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
I like it very much :)
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
that was good
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