Reviews for I tried
Icewing chapter 1 . 1/19
Omg, this was really great! The only part that got me all worked up was the part about him leaving like... WHO DOES THAT?!
Thats just wrong!'

Crowfeather: What is your point Icewing?

Leafpool: *Pants* Crowfeather... I-i-i'm expecting ur kits. *Collapse*

Crowfeather: Leafpool! No! *rushes to her side*

Nightcloud: Crowfeather? Its over, i'm not ur mate anymore :(!

Icewing (Me): Umm, BAI FALISHIAS!

Greatjob person! Do More! Hate cliffhangers!
HunterAtNight chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I love your short stories, Crowfeather sounds sad…
TheBlackForest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
SWEETNESS
Fireflame 's chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Love! crowy! Join ThunderClan for me Fireflame, and Leafy!
Selection chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I like this quite a bit. Some typos that are easy fixes, but overall, this was very simple and melancholy. It's easy to imagine this being exactly how it went down.

Good job.
Lily chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This is really good! Poor Leafpool... :(
Deleteduserdeletedaccount chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Crow feather is a black kat