|Reviews for The Games of Moriarty|
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/29/2013
There are no words to say on how awsome Moriarty is; I might just be liking him more than the orignial awesomeness of Moriarty
| Muffinmilk317 chapter 24 . 8/4/2013
This was awesome!
| Blueblur2000 chapter 24 . 7/28/2013
Woah. I ALMOST felt compassion for Moriarty, but like Odd said. He always had a choice. That was a weird confrontation though, and I LOVED IT. You're a great writer, and I could never be more excited for an update. Woooooo!
| funman1111 chapter 24 . 7/30/2013
me: (inside a bubble of energy floating in the void between worlds) do you remember me? I can finally log in...I have created this bubble of energy and entered the void between worlds so that my creations
arin, aquas, blood shadow, golden snake, natu, and neron may not interfere...even if they do enter the spaces between worlds created by the mind ,fan fiction and other things which is unlikely do to the rise in crime here, then they still cannot get inside this bubble...I want this review to be my words and mine alone and to pertain to this story...the die has truly been cast of that there is no doubt if the warriors score higher on there die then they shall win and if mority scores higher than the world and justice falls
but what if the die fall the same? if such an event were to happen despite the near impossibility then would not peace be true? but such is by the nature of the to sides nigh impossible.
(holds to orbs of energy in up) (an image forms in the left orb...to figures one red the other blue both armed with blades of there own color darkened. clash there power eqwel they stand at an impasse)
there are now to sides the blue light of the warriors and the bloodthirsty moriaty...
(the other orb glows bright and shows a fight between alietia and her dark counterpart)
every strike that lands true by one hurts the other
(alitia's image lunches an energy field that grazes the shoulder of her opponent and the blue figure charges landing a strike on its red foe nicking its arm but dark alitia throws the attacker to the ground and the red form kicks the blue)
both earth and lyoko are there battle ground both are there war zone and both sides are determined but only one can win...I must go now im sure you remember me from my other reviews...I think I left some...this time I shall not threaten you for the updates...you know what mast be done and so I bid you adiu...(instead of suddenly warping like normal slow fades away)
| toastedCroissants chapter 24 . 7/29/2013
I never expected this update to come this quickly; time goes by fast. Very interesting and awesome chapter, like always! I really thought that Moriarty was going to take Odd's offer, but then I realized that things aren't always that easy, especially when it has to do with putting a stop to Moriarty. It was a VERY nice twist, though! :D Great job! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :)
| Shiza Hako chapter 24 . 7/27/2013
YOU ARE KILLING ME MAN. THIS SUSPENSE IS FUCKING DREADFUL.
| Muffinmilk317 chapter 23 . 7/27/2013
OH MY CHICKEN! MORIARTY IS A BASTARD! What the hell Jeremy? Why can't you spare one for a thousand?! But great chapter! But is Moriarty going to possess Odd again? Is Emmanuel really going to die?
| toastedCroissants chapter 23 . 7/12/2013
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! :) Take your time with the updates, though.
I just wanted to say that this was written just as good (maybe even better) as any of the previous chapters. (: Your consistency with the fantastic quality of this story amazes me. Keep it up!
...I still can't get over how merciless Moriarty is with killing innocent people... O_O It makes me very sad.
PS: THIS STORY IS AMAZING! :DDDDD Hehe... I hope you make it to 100 reviews like you wish, because you really deserve it! I'll try my best with reviewing every chapter, just to boost your count. (;
Okay. I'm done. Goodbye! (:
| juliaismostawesome-o chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
Okay first of all: Michelle. What was she thinking dating Simon? You can't date two members of the same band! Even if Simon is just the sound engineer. Second of all: the scene between Ulrich and Yumi was depicted perfectly. Third of all: I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS! Poor Emmanuel, though. And the poor Lyoko Warriors having to make such a rough decision at a young age. I feel like they're going to lose in the end. Moriarty is too much out of their league. But that's just me. Either way, I know you'll write the rest of the chapters as magnificently as you have written this one and the previous ones. As always, keep up the good work.
| Silentiarius chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
I did notice a few grammar errors as I was reading, but considering how wonderfully well-done this story is, it's not a big deal.
Can't wait to see what's coming down the road! ;)
| blueblur2000 chapter 23 . 7/6/2013
You never cease to amaze me in your talents. The wait, is definitely something nobody should complain about, this is literally the best Code Lyoko fanfiction story I've ever read. If I could write half as well as you... I can't even imagine.
Well, the one thing the remains consistent is your ability to surprise your readers, and make them want to cry for their favorite character because Christophe just implied that Jeremie and Moriarty are similar. No one disses the Jeremie. Haha well I honestly could feel the emotion in the chapter, and connect with the characters, no matter how much was happening at once.
I can't wait for the next chapter and it's whirlwind of emotional terror. You should write a book someday.
P.s: my favorite part is still when Christophe called Jeremie "commandant". The reaction was so heartfelt.
| Muffinmilk317 chapter 22 . 6/22/2013
Why you had to leave it at that?! I want to see Aelita's reaction! Thanks for updating!
| RascalKat chapter 22 . 6/9/2013
How dare Moriarty use such a noble quote?! Despicable...
Anyway, I just wanted to say I'm stunned with how flawlessly this has all been integrated with Code Lyoko: Evolution. As I watched the new show, I kept thinking how Tyron and Moriarty seemed similar, but at the same time Moriarty is a far better villain than anything Moonscoop came up with ;) I am, however, glad to see that you've added Tyron to the mix, and quite seamlessly, I might add!
I have one question: Did you know most of what was going to happen when you posted the first chapter? This is such a large fanfic, I can't imagine that you didn't at least have an outline. It's so well thought out, too. The artistry of your writing is amazing to say the least (i.e. parallel episodes and characters, etc.). For example, I only now realize that the Schaeffer-Antea-Moriarty love triangle are parallel to the Jeremie-Aelita-Odd triangle (Odd, however, chose a different path, resulting in a much better ending, of course). Did you intend to do that, or is that just one of those lucky everything-fits-together-perfectly-for-some-weird- reason moments? Because, I have to say, there seem to be far too many of those types of details for me to believe it was all pure luck. There had to be some sort of master plan for this fic, right? :)
With that said, I just wanted to say I am loving this story to death. This is easily one of the top three fanfics I've ever read, and I keep rereading it (mostly the bits about Odd's PTSD and how he has overcome his possession, I just love him so much XD) because it's just that good. I can't wait for the next chapter! I know I won't be disappointed!
| toastedCroissants chapter 22 . 6/9/2013
FANTASTIC. You did it again. (: The emotions and the action were balanced perfectly to captivate me all the way to the end. I absolutely couldn't put the story down! I wish I could favorite your fic a million times, no joke. This. Is. A. Masterpiece.
I look forward the next chapter. (:
| Emil C chapter 21 . 6/3/2013
How are you? I apologize since it's been awhile since I last wrote a review for your story. That doesn't mean I have not keep up with your story, though.
Now that been said, somebody I trust and has worked on this site has pointed out to me that it is against this site's rules for people to publish stories inscript format...
I am not saying that they are goign to shut you down, but just be careful. Also, I am glad that you have finally desisted from making that kid talk spanish and has opted on making him talk mostly in english, it's quite a relief actually. The guy's awkward spanish was sending meto the roof as I wanted to literally jump on the screen and strangle you...
Take it as a compliment, though. Like my parents always say: 'If you care enough to kill someone or berat the crap out of them for their own good it's because you care for them!"
At least that's what my mom told me everytime my dad... Anyways, back in track!
Props for the Oscar guy! Also, I think we were expecting that kind of reaction from Aelita, but she feels fake. Like she seems a little shaken by the news but not completely devastated; and I personally thought for the direction you where taking your story you could make a little improvement there so i can actually visualize her pain. I mean, not even her dialogues where something that impressed me. She felt... half-hearted...? Maybe she's in a shock, perhaps?
A thing that I did loved was this last phrase: "He has touched a part of me that can't be repaired. He's dug in so close to me and I can't escape him!" I know what you did there, nice!
Seriously, the first time I read that I was all like: "Ahhhh... Japanesse highschool girls and their tentacles... Wait she's french...Oh. AHHHHH! Hahahahhahahah! XD"
Needless to say my parents asked me if I had been drinking too much soda or something. I probably had, but oh well...
Moriarty is not as original now, though. His movements are becoming lack of creativity and predictable. I guess that's why Jeremie has been able to keep up with him, but seriously, I think the guys are just overthinking stuff and they should actually be more bold before he changes his strategy again. And trust me, I am not the type of person that likes to charge rashly towards an enemy.
Anyways, I am grateful for all your efforts and genuine love for this series. i have to ask, have you watched Code Lyoko: Evolution? I heard alot of people flaming it. I'm not going to lie, it's is different. But it's not bad...
I mean, my biggest complain is the boy the chose for Odd, the Yumi is not Asian enough, Aelita looks like a guy with pink hair and they should allow the girl playing as Sissi to appear more on the show! She is H.O.T.!
I liked the Jeremie and the William is just soo cool! Still, I can't believe the team held so much grudge against him after 3 years or so... But I guess it makes sense... French people... XD
Muchas gracias mi amigo!
Espero que este mensaje te impulse a escribir más de tus maravillosas historias,