Reviews for The Games of Moriarty
Muffinmilk317 chapter 21 . 5/13/2013
Great chapter! Such a sad ending. I feel bad for Aelita. But her orgins are so messed up and complicated. Please update soon!
Blueblur2000 chapter 21 . 5/8/2013
You may have taken some time to update but everyone has their limits. You did such a spectacular job with all the mixed emotions of this. Very realistic. More chappiez sooooooon!
Silentiarius chapter 21 . 5/8/2013
I do enjoy this story and I'm glad to see an update. It's very good!

As for the events of this chapter... Poor Aelita! :(
percyjacksonfan1998 chapter 20 . 3/18/2013
Best fanfiction ever! Very nicely written with a fat juicy plot! Update please!
Xander and Kanja chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Neon Lice chapter 20 . 2/24/2013
Just a note. They did not destroy Moriarty's human form. He escaped just before Odd could.
Lywick chapter 20 . 2/21/2013
Great chapter, it was well worth the wait! hope to see more from Patrick soon!
Muffinmilk317 chapter 20 . 2/23/2013
How dare they beat up someone defenseless! But anyway this was a good chapter! I really appreciate you writing another chapter! It really made me happy and probably others too. I'm also glad that they destroyed Moriarty's human form. Odd was really brave. We haven't seen that in a couple of chapters. You know? Last but not Least I hope that you write more! Thank you.
toastedCroissants chapter 20 . 2/22/2013
AHH, that was so GOOD! The suspense was killing me! It was well worth the wait. (: I read this all morning right before school, when I was supposed to be studying for the bible test.. Haha, I RARELY do that, so good job!

I'll be happily waiting for the next chapter!

juliaismostawesome-o chapter 19 . 2/22/2013
Okay, I'm reviewing again. Every time you mention one of the guys being in the doghouse, I laugh so hard I cry. Especially in the the first chappie when William coughs and says doghouse. Okay, until next time.

P.S. It wouldn't let me post a second review for chapter 20, so chapter 19 it is!
ReinaMZ chapter 20 . 2/22/2013
This chapter was well worth the wait and kept me on the edge of my seat. You are doing an excellent job.
juliaismostawesome-o chapter 20 . 2/21/2013
Oh. My. Gosh. Swimming pool attack game. That was the greatest. I love all your little references. Anyways, fantastic as usual. I feel like my words are meaningless compared to how terrific this fanfiction is, so I guess I'll end my review with this; keep up the amazingly wonderful work!
Shiza Hako chapter 19 . 2/6/2013
Well done.
Shiza Hako chapter 18 . 2/4/2013
Well done BRAVO
serialkiller567 chapter 9 . 1/26/2013
Really unlikely but are you going to make the Kolossus come in? just finished chapter 9
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