Reviews for The Games of Moriarty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Such a sad ending. I feel bad for Aelita. But her orgins are so messed up and complicated. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() You may have taken some time to update but everyone has their limits. You did such a spectacular job with all the mixed emotions of this. Very realistic. More chappiez sooooooon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do enjoy this story and I'm glad to see an update. It's very good! As for the events of this chapter... Poor Aelita! :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best fanfiction ever! Very nicely written with a fat juicy plot! Update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SOOOO GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muffinmilk317 Just a note. They did not destroy Moriarty's human form. He escaped just before Odd could. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter, it was well worth the wait! hope to see more from Patrick soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How dare they beat up someone defenseless! But anyway this was a good chapter! I really appreciate you writing another chapter! It really made me happy and probably others too. I'm also glad that they destroyed Moriarty's human form. Odd was really brave. We haven't seen that in a couple of chapters. You know? Last but not Least I hope that you write more! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHH, that was so GOOD! The suspense was killing me! It was well worth the wait. (: I read this all morning right before school, when I was supposed to be studying for the bible test.. Haha, I RARELY do that, so good job! I'll be happily waiting for the next chapter! -toastedCroissants |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm reviewing again. Every time you mention one of the guys being in the doghouse, I laugh so hard I cry. Especially in the the first chappie when William coughs and says doghouse. Okay, until next time. P.S. It wouldn't let me post a second review for chapter 20, so chapter 19 it is! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was well worth the wait and kept me on the edge of my seat. You are doing an excellent job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Gosh. Swimming pool attack game. That was the greatest. I love all your little references. Anyways, fantastic as usual. I feel like my words are meaningless compared to how terrific this fanfiction is, so I guess I'll end my review with this; keep up the amazingly wonderful work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done BRAVO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really unlikely but are you going to make the Kolossus come in? just finished chapter 9 |