Reviews for The Transfer |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() That confrontation was painful to read, but a long time in coming. Naru hugging Mai after the nightmare made me absolutely MELT! And the two of them being jealous of the other drawing attention never gets old. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made my day! Thank you! The chapter was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't usually leave reviews but this story is definitely worth it. Keep up the amazing work man! Can't wait to read the rest. Been following this story for years. |
![]() ![]() Another wonderful chapter! I cannot wait to continue seeing Naru and Mai’s relationship develop and hopefully we’ll get a confession soon! Coming to read this new chapter always feels like meeting up with an old group of friends; you write everyone’s personalities and dynamics so amazingly that I always get sucked in and it feels like I’m in the story. It’s always such a great surprise to see an email with an update! Thank you so much for continuing to update; take your time and know we will all wait for you. It has been years but you’ll always have a loyal reader with me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! I'm unashamed to note that I actively check to see if there's been an update that I didn't get a notification for. This chapter was so, so sweet. I've never been so involved with the actual storyline and been able to feel so pleasantly thrilled at the character projection and development. Can't wait for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! It’s always such a pleasant surprise to get the notification for this story! I love how things are starting to pick up on the paranormal front, and I’m definitely looking forward to seeing the whole team in action! Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m always so so excited when I see a notification for this in my inbox. I’ve been reading this fic for literally years and it remains one of my absolute favorite stories. Your characterization of everyone is so perfect, they seem more adult having changed and grown up over the years, but still have all the core aspects of the characters we know and love. I’m so happy you keep writing this story and as always I’ll be excited when the next update drops. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't ever scramble to read anything faster than when I see you update. Amazing chapter as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg “soft-core pornography” took me OUT lol. so excited for a new case! wonderful as always! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() MALINDORIE-SAN OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. I'M RUSHING IN AS SOON AS I GOT THE NOTIFICATION EMAIL. I haven't read the chapter yet (i know it'll be amazing), but i iust want to say thank you, thank you so much. Seeing your name and update literally just brighten up my week. I hope you're well wherever you are, Malindorie-san. God bless you and your family. So much love! Now that i've said my rant, imma read the chapter |
![]() ![]() OH. MY. GOD! U read all fic for 2 days and this was AMAZING! I love your Naru and how he recognise his feelings, hiw he wants help and be near to Mai. I love Mai and her pure love to Naru, love her being prepare to do so much for him. I mean she literally did somethind so crazy and dangerous. She and Gene, i love their dynamic. (And it's kinda fun when Naru being jelly... and this while Gene & Mai's dynamic more looks like family or besties or something very platonic). And Martin and Luella! They are BRILLIANT! Love them so much. And gosh, ending here? Poor Martin. That's hurt. I mean what you can feel and do when someone you like as your student and son's love sees other sons death during last ~2 year? That's rough. Anyway. I wanna say you THANK YOU veryvery much. Your fic so cool. I love every chapter here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just rereading this again. I really truly love this story. I remember reading it on the way to high school in the mornings and over the years it’s kept a special place in my heart. Your writing is excellent and the characters feel so vivid. They truly feel like themselves, just a bit more grown up but with all the same quirky charm that made me love the show in the first place. As always thank you for this story, I hope you’re doing well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() just finished! Read this whole thing in less than 3 days. I hope you still cherish this and update soon. Loves! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Madoka breathed a sigh of relief - if Noll was bitching, it meant he was okay." I must have read this fic like a billion times and this will still always be funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to know what else is going on, your story has me hooked |