You had me laughing and crying with Mai!

I really do love this story, and I love the bit at the end where Naru finally shows some emotion! Being shocked, who would have known he was capable of it! But Mai of course would be the one to do it hehehe

Please update soon!

Omg I love this entire chapter! It was sweet & sad & I loved feeling so emotional. You are continuing to do beautiful with this! Great job!

Beautifully crafted chapter.

"The Transfer" is a weekly gift. Thank you.

Love this story!

can't wait for the next update!:)))

Such such such an amazing chapter. I cried at a couple points, not going to lie. I love that you threw in that bit about Mai's birthday, it was interesting to see Naru so confused by Mai's reaction to her birthday (and Luella's horror at her forgetting was hilarious). I love how you wrote Naru this chapter. The fact that he was confused as to why he wanted to help her so bad, and awkward about doing it, but that he did it anyway. This chapter was so touching, was so sweet and sad, yet you knew exactly when to throw in little pieces of humor that just fit perfectly. I really can't wait to read more so please update soon!

~Jess

loves it please keep it up and aww that was sweet of naru XD

Awesome chapter! That was so sweet and kind loved it!

I really love thew way you write! You really grasped the characters and i feel like im really reading a sequel to ghost hunt! i love it pls...MORE! xD

~Celestial Star12

Awww poor Mai! She's gone through so much & I have a feeling it isn't over yet...I hope things turn out well. Loved seeing smart, fearless Mai in this chapter too! Way to impress Naru!

Another excelent chapter :)

Mai saves her narcrisist's equiptement! if he only knew about that...missing tape part what was about. ha! ha! poor Mai, she really miss her parents.

MAIxNARU are so kawaii! funny and romantic.

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

I have a question! Why were Lin's shiki weaker than normal? Was it really just due to the earlier attack, or is something else going on? Something about the way you described them made me think there was more going on than just being depleted from a previous attack, but I could easily be reading too much into it. I do that.

I really, really liked how you handled this chapter. I think Mai's actions during the fight were perfectly in character for her slightly older, slightly wiser self. It was good to see her coming to Naru's rescue an his reaction to it. Again, your interpersonal interactions are very good. Even in Mai's discussions with Jimmy and the fog spirit's defiance of the Leader you showed a real talent.

As for Mai and the Toro Nagashi, while I'd like Naru to step up and take her to participate in either a private ceremony or to a local ceremony, it's really not his character. I do think it would be neat if Martin would show that eventually Naru could get a clue though and take Mai and Luella to participate somewhere. My thought was that despite being an obsessive scientist like his son, he's actually married to a woman who loves him. Therefore, he just might, occasionally, show a caring side. He seems to be culturally tuned in enough that he asked to have Japanese dishes prepared, so taking Mai to participate for her parents and Luella to participate for Gene isn't out of the realm of possibility. Plus Mai's sure to test better when she isn't depressed, and if the spirits are returning with the lanterns than maybe they will show up and be seen. ;)

Another fabulous chapter! I loved how you wrapped this case up, and Mai protecting Naru for a change, was great! I love that she refused to let him push her behind him, and wanted to take care of him for a change. I loved that you explained why Jimmy was still there. And the end was so sad with the festival and stuff. I can't wait to read more so please please please update again soon!

~Jess

Maybe they should take a trip to Japan for Mai! And awesome chapter by the way!:)