awww xD poor Naru. I can't wait for the next chapter :))

LOL! Another amazing chapter, ripe with innuendoes. Totally whacky, and fun. At the same time, the case is progressing further. Madoka mentioned a case of hazing before...could it be related to this one? Male genitalia crushing sounds like ghostly vengeance to me...hmm. Really interesting.

I do hope none of the male SPR team's "equipment" comes to harm; that would be a shame for Mai. XD

And I am so glad that Mai is more open with her dream experiences now; in the manga, it frustrated me to no end how she would dismiss most of her experiences. She really was quite bad with communicating her ideas before, huh? But I'm glad she got over it here...it shows how she's more confident and mature now, too. :)

I have been so busy lately, so I couldn't read or review your updates immediately; I hope you don't mind. I just started hospital duty last week, and its seriously fun but equally tiring. Reading your updates is a good and fun way to relax these days. :) I will review whenever I can.

-CFB

PS.

Hope you're feeling better now. :)

OMG I love this update! We get tons of jokes (I was rolling on the floor and had to actually pause and gather my bearings lol), some action, and a cute little Mai/Naru snip-it in the end! Amazing and can't wait for more! Dying to see more of Mai's powers :D

hope you're getting well :)

Great chapter as always. I laughed so hard during the manhood thing, especially when Naru mentioned the insurance not knowing what they were really talking about :D hilarious. What I also liked very much was Naru's gentle interrogation in the last scene... As you mentioned it between the lines he kept his soft voice to prevent her from "waking up" from her sensitive state but he still started off their conversation wanting Mai to talk in japanese. becoming sentimental naru, aren't we ? :DD I loooove a careful characterized Naru being in love without realizing it yet :D So sweet and so IN - character. really really goood joob *thumbs up* :)

I'm glad you were able to update. When writers who update on a regular schedule don't update I find myself moving into worst case scenario mode and trying to talk myself down. What if they were in a horrible car wreck? What if there was a family tragedy? No wait, maybe they had company and couldn't update because they were having too much fun? :)

Yasuhara is a twisted man. Very entertaining! I also like Lin's dread regarding Madoka and Yasuhara's collusion. I've always said Lin is a smart man.

"dozens of eyes" makes me wonder if this spirit is the original plus everyone who has been killed since. Could the docile spirit be the guy who spoke half-heartedly? Also, either you just didn't feel like mentioning it, or Mai's powers don't activate the scars. They seem to be completely related to Naru's PK. I find myself wondering if the scars glow under those gloves like Naru did when he used his powers in the cave.

I'm really enjoying how you have the case playing out and how you structured the ending with Mai answering almost in her sleep. That really worked to bring back memories of the old SPR cases for some reason. It was kind of nostalgic.

I hope you feel better soon.

that suck i'm glad you feel better

ooo so he CAN be thoughtful... sorta

YOU. my dear, are amazing. LMAO

I LOOOVED THIS SO MUCH 33

that was a hilarious joke you had going xDD

i'll be waiting for the next chapter~

I hope you get better soon though :[

Bahahahahahahahahah! Yes, we certainly wouldn't want Naru to damage his equipment before Mai got to it! XD My brother was looking at me funny 'cuz as I read over about Naru's equipment I was nearly on the floor laughing. lol Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the next!

Another amazing chapter! The case is very interesting and I love how Mai is getting so proficient at this. I am still waiting for her to really surprise him with her new skills especially her experience as a lead investigator. That part with Yasu implying all those sexual things about Naru's "equipment' was absolutely hilarious, I was dying! Such a good chapter, can't wait for another chapter so please update again soon!

~Jess

I love this chapter! I couldt stop myself from laughing!

Looking forward to the next chapter! :0)

that was so...FUNNNY! poor Mai. as for Naru i cna't stop thinking about Yasu's joke with the equipement, whenever it's a camera or a wire or anything that joke pops up! Naru would have freak if he knew what happened the time of his absence and Mai's red face. i wonder if she ever lowered her eyes on him when she was thinking what Yasu was saying? men do think of sex about it every 3 minutes, does he?

MAIxNARU forever!

please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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Yasu is soooo freakin funny!;)))

I think she should go to be there neat her Naru better.

MAIxNARU forever!

Please UPDATE really soon!

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I AM definitely loving this story! Believe me, I don't say that often. I'll elaborate later - sorry, my current cold is not conducive for writing a review. Anyway, this story is being favorited. :D