Reviews for The Transfer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the chapter can't wait 4 the lab testing 2 begin |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story ! haha. please update soon ! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great chapter! I didn't mean for it to take so long for me to get around to reading it. I absolutely LOVED the whole casual sex conversation and that Naru was so confused and shocked by it. I also want to know who that guy that Mai and Yasu were talking about it. I also really love how you incorporated John and Masako's case and how you worked in the explanation that Mai is the lead investigator (LOVE Naru's shock)! Anyway, GREAT job, please update again soon! ~Jess |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG too funny! Naru was so speechless! And now he's running for Mai cuz he's so dang impressed! Hehehe! I am eating this story up like no one's business! Keep up the awesome work! You are doing fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The bit about Yasuhara and his bar hopping, womanizing habits (and Naru's shock about how everyone treated it as normal) was very amusing. I loved how you showed Mai's skill as an investigator, and I'm looking forward to the conversation Naru and Mai seem to be about to have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way to be smooth Naru-chan... :P Awesome chappie! Can't wait until the next time. Ja-ne! :D |
![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully crafted. Excellent pacing. Rich, dynamic and authentic character development. Your story is a joy to read. The friction between Mai and Naru makes me smile. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bahahahahahahaha! That was sooo funny! I especially loved that Naru had to try not to look like he was running after Mai. ;) Really can't wait for the next chapter now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, the story is very promising! I love your story line and although I'm not a huge fan of POV changes, you manage to do them quite subtile and fitting ;) The role reversal during Mais phone case was so funny . Normally Mai would be the one to "Naru! Look!" and Naru: "Lin, stop the tape!" etc. :D these allusions were so great. Especially when Mai even disagreed with Naru or interrupted him boss-like :D *nahaha* But I wonder what will happen, when they don't "live togetehr" anymore. It's obvious that you keep them as long as possible in this cozy atmosphere, but still I'm curious to know what kind of Mai/Naru-interactions we can expect outside his home at SPR or the Campus... In the end: I was always convinced that the only way that Naru and Mai can be together is when both adjust themselves at least slightly to the other. Not only Naru has to become a bit softer (which he is in fact ;)) but also Mai should offer more than only her happy-go-lucky attitude. The way to Naru's heart is through paranormal science, you have to admit that :D That's why your mature Mai is on the very best way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not just like this chapter, I LOVE IT! I wish I could read new chapter everyday, but well, of course you need to go on with other things in life, so, yeah, I'll try to be patient and wait for the next one whenever you can update it. But still, I would really happy if you could update soon ... ;p anyway, say hooray for Mai! she actually succeeded in making Naru shocked! way to go Mai! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved that chapter is was so funny! And I knew that Mai was the boss! I just knew it knew it knew it!:);) |
![]() ![]() Aww... Naru's jealous! It's so cute! |
![]() ![]() It's official, you are one of the most best author, this chapter is awesome, more amazing than the last chapters. Owh~ the HUMOUR, the DRAMA it was FANTASTIC, BRILLIANT! I can't take it anymore but to write you this but don't worry when I'm not reviewing your story doesn't mean it's not good, it just mean I'm loving it and I just can't find the flaws for the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! MAIxNARU forever! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |