Whoooo! So fun! Loved this chapter!

Yasu is so horrible! But I'm glad Naru got to see a new side to his former employees. It seemed to have opened his eyes to jsut how much has changed.

I cannot wait for another chapter! I hope you find the time to update soon!

Awesome! Please please keep writing!

Loved the update. Though I am sad Naru still thinks Mai loves Gene...Sometimes I want to smack him lol! Poor Mai having to relive that dream too...and Naru. Can't even imagine it! Looking forward to the next fantastic update!

I like how you worked in the explanation of Mai's adoption into the story. I also liked Madoka noticing how Mai was uncomfortable about the money. Another mystery to add to the list when it comes to Mai.

I thought you did a really good job with Naru's POV and thought process in this. The conversation between Mai and Naru worked well too.

if the theory about her animal-insticts are true, then i bet she has only one mate also, Naru. which he make her sad by thinking she want Gene and not him and being a total ass! she should tell him about everything, after all he cares about her and want her safe, if only could put some brain in his head as he say he have to confess his feelings. he really know her. what will he do so she can't have the nightmares, after all they make her not to sleep, being tired and makes her sick. poor Mai.

MAIxNARU forever!

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

Poor Naru. I hate hearing/reading about twins that are that close being split up. Even if it's fictional. It makes me want to cry. I mean, being separated from your sibling like that is hard enough, but even worse if you're very, very close. It's probably even harder for Naru because of the connection he had with Gene. :(

Anyway, really good chapter! I can't wait for the next update! XD

Great chapter. The interaction between Mai and Naru at the end was well written. I liked the altering points of view, its was the perfect amount of insight into each person's thoughts. I wasn't as in love with the Mai/Bou-san/Ayako interaction, but they are always a little bit annoying to me in any fanfic or even the manga. Heh. However, I did love Mai's attempts at setting up baits and traps. It shows how well she knows the other characters. Anyway, good job! I look forward to your next update!

This was sooo good to come home to! XD Anyway, Dawn Daydreamer is amazing and has inspired a fanfiction I've yet to post. I love the way the author of that fic has portrayed Mai's instinct and Mai's reaction. I really hope that particular fic is updated soon. :) Anyway, great chapter. You really have nailed the characters. Of course, Naru would be clever enough to figure out much of the truth and the way they interact (Mai and Naru) is definitely how I see things playing out. Well done!

OMG Naru, you really are soooo dense for someone who claimed himself as a genius ...

how could you still believe that Mai was in love with Gene?

tsk tsk tsk -_-

Great Chappie! I love it! More chapter please! (preferably faster, LOL)

Whoo new chapter! And Naru and Mai even had some talk time. I'm still so curious to find out what has happened with Mai. The scars and the eight hospital visits.

I can't wait to find out. :) I hope you update soon!

Yet another fantastic chapter! I love that Yasu started that argument basically but let her win because Naru was there. The whole thing with Naru figuring out what she was actually dreaming about was perfect, there was no way he would be fooled by them lol. The whole part at the end of the chapter with Mai and Naru's conversation was so cute and heartbreaking all at the same time and all you want to do is to scream at Naru that she's not in love with Gene. I also love that you had Naru worried about Mai's 8 hospital visits, but that he didn't necessarily understand that worry was what he was feeling. Anyway, such a great chapter and I can't wait to read more so PLEASE update again soon!

~Jess

This story is absolutely hallarious! I almost died of laughter while reading this! Keep up the good work!

poor Mai. however Naru was really worried for her. ;-)

Luella made Mai feel really nice, like a new family member, maybe her future mother-in-law, kawaii! i wonder what will MAIxNARU do?

MAIxNARU forever!

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

I love how Luella and Mai are bonding! It's probably gonna bug Naru that they will most likely (I'm assuming) be spending more time together. Anything to annoy our favorite narcissist! You are doing beautifully so far! And I have so many questions about Gene and Mai's recurring dream and Naru's views on Gene being back! I am dying to know the answers!

Ah, yes, us English do love our tea. My brother went to Japan, and he said that they were so much more obsessed. They even had vending machines full of the stuff!