I enjoy this story so much so that when I see an update I make sure to start reading before allowing myself to do anything else. XD You've done a wonderful job of keeping the characters in character and breathing a sort of life into them. I absolutely love the way you portray Luella too. :) Can't wait to read more!

Next week? :C

You know, I find this story very interesting. It's like, giving a 'continue reading!' aura. Every part continues to amuse me and keeps my eyes glued to the screen. My brother even asked me why I was grinning and frowning infront of my laptop.

I hope you update soon! -And you're welcome (message) c;

Ja ne!

This chapter was so sweet. It was so nice to see the two oxygen talking and gettingto know each other. And Luella sure is good at her psychological analyzing. I can't wait for the next chapter! I really hope you update soon!

I'd apologize but Luella is too good to be missed. I liked her reactions to Mai's tales of Japan's SPR. The part about the dream and Gene, and Naru's noticing the gloves and, well, everything, was well written. Things flow naturally in your writing and the characters come alive.

Now that Luella has been dealt with, Naru's interrogation of Mai may begin! Thanks for the great story.

Wow, loved this chapter! First of all the whole dream thing is super creepy and totally sad! I wanna know more about the drowning thing at the end and why she always throws up. Second, that talk with Luella was adorable. I love that she wanted to know more about Mai and hear things from her perspective. Also, I think this is the first story I've read where Luella isn't just as much into the paranormal stuff as her family. I have to say it really works for your story! Anyway, you're doing a fantastic job so PLEASE update soon!

~Jess

Love love love love LOVE this story so far! I love how you've matured the characters in a completely believable way. They all seem older and to have grown personally but still being true to their characters. I can't wait to find out what Mai's nightmare is about and also to hear about the scars. And your interactions with Mai and Naru are priceless (he is so dumb lol). I really love how you have Lin obviously have missed Mai and to see that he respects her as well (I've always thought that after the Urado case when she confronts him about being Japanese that they've had a special bond). Anyway, you're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read more so please update soon!

~Jess

On the one hand, I'm glad I've caught up with the current chapter. On the other hand, I want to read the next chapter. ;)

You do such a good job with the humor here. It seems real, as opposed to some of the forced humor that doesn't flow with the story. "Save me Please", bringing rope, Naru's addiction to Mai's tea, all of it played very well. Luella's character really works for me.

I have serious mixed feelings about the next chapter. On the one hand, I want to know about the dream, and about Gene, Naru, Mai and how Mai's powers are tied to Naru. On the other hand, I'd love to be witness to Martin and Luella's conversation about the day and their son's behavior. Especially with the tea. I guess it doesn't really matter though, no matter what the next chapter brings, I'm sure I'll enjoy it.

I could tell you I loved the "sexalicious" gloves. I could go on about Naru's attempt to explain his feelings about Mai. I could mention Yasuhara's attempt to make Naru jealous. All of it would be true. But for me, the hands down best part of the chapter was Luella. While I liked Martin's viewpoint too, the way you wrote Luella's thoughts and reactions to her son's behavior was wonderful. I love seeing how he reacts through her eyes.

There were so many good parts to this chapter. Starting with, "Naru covertly glanced around the terminal. Just in case the world was coming to an end." you did a great job of getting into the minds of your characters and showing their behavior. Madoka's plotting, and her picture taking, were perfect. I am completely intrigued by Mai's scars, her powers and her tie to Naru. And I enjoyed Yasu's distraction.

I do wonder why, when Martin gave their names, you gave the family names of the guy's first (Yasuhara, Takigawa) and the girls got their family names last?

I've been reading this since you published it, and I'm just now getting around to reviewing. I am very sorry for waiting so long! I'm going to try to review each chapter as if I am reading it for the first time because I feel it cheats the author when you only review the last of multiple chapters.

I like the set up and the inclusion of Naru's parents in this. Mai's new abilities are pretty neat too. Yasuhara when written well is always a good addition to the story line. Between his mischievous ways and Mai's reactions the two of them in England should be quite entertaining.

This is defiantly one of my favorite Ghost Hunt fanficts so far. Keep it up and update soon please!

intersting and lovely story, it's totally funny, romantic and kawaii! i wonder what happen to her hands to have these scars, i bet Naru will ask her soon. as for what nightmare is starting? i hope Naru will be there for her.

MAIxNARU forever!

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

Love it! :D

I found this story very amusing and entertaining (even though it has just started). I hope you continue the great job.

Please update as soon as you can. (:

OMG .. Naru drank his orange tea in one gulp just so he could drink Mai's tea! that's so sweet of him! (uh oh, I guess he glare at me right now, lol)

great chappie! it really fun-tastic!

update soon please o

Another successful update! I love how well you know the characters. And I love how you know them so well that they're changes are enough to see that things have moved forward but not so much that they are different characters all together. Can't wait to figure out what is going on with Mai. Really nice job!