Wow so far so good I already like this story I will be checking every day to see if the next chapter is up good luck making the next chapter!

I am pleased to inform you that even though I thought this would be cliche and generally intolerable, you have surpassed my expectations and made a promising start to a new story. in other words: loved it! update soon! XD

I have to quote my favorite line thus far: "You can't show up on Professor Martin Davis' doorstep and lob a spoon at his son's head." It was brilliant. And this story is brilliant for your first one. I can't wait to read more from you. I remember what it was like starting off. Anyways, good luck with this!

Love,

Jazzy

Great plot and story line I love how ur developing the characters it really makes you think "what's gunna happen next?"

Can't wait for the next chapter ;)

A very intriguing story. I'm excited about the reunion scene. :)

OMG I LOVE THIS! This sounds like a recipe for fun fun fun fun fun! Can't wait for the update! And I absolutely love how detailed you are!

GAAAHHH! I LOVE IT! i think my family probably thought I was mad when i was reading this i kept laughing! i just can't wait to read more:)

Mai have PK-LT now?

whoa, that's totally awsome!

I want more!

please update soon

Sounds really interesting! I can't wait for more!

This plot sounds very interesting and Ithought that your writing flowed very well. I love that you included Yasu he is my favorite!

Also this idea popped up and made me laugh while reading if Yasu instead of hitting on Martin started to hit on Naru in front of his parents? I think it would be sooo funny, and can you imagine Luella's face?

Keep writing and update soon :)