Reviews for The Transfer |
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![]() ![]() I love your work :,) 3 |
![]() ![]() I follow this story for so many years and can’t get tired of it. It’s always a gift for me when you update it Thank you so much for that, can’t wait for the next chap! |
![]() ![]() And here I am, rereading this masterpiece and one more time, falling in love with your work! Reading this fanfic at least two times a year is already a tradition to me. Thank you so much to not give up on us and gift this preciosity with more chapters. Can’t wait to see the next ones, as now plot is reaching its climax! |
![]() ![]() There are some authors who are able to capture the very essence of the original work so flawlessly, and Malindorie, you are unquestionably among that elite group. Your fanfiction is not just good, it's perfect - parallel in caliber to the original narrative, if not greater. Your writing is beyond astounding. The context, the setting, and the unfolding of the plot are all remarkably adherent to the original work. Beyond that, every character breathes authenticity; regardless of whether they are thinking, acting, or flowing with the story, it's as if they've jumped straight off the pages of the original into your world of fanfiction. This kind of mastery over characterization is rare and deserves the highest accolades. Furthermore, for someone engaging in the challenging dance of adult life, the consistency with which you manage to update new chapters is a laudable feat on its own. Your commitment towards your readers, despite the hardship we believe you face, is truly commendable. In conclusion, I would like to express my profound appreciation for your writing. Please don't give up! Continue to weave your magic, continue to create these extraordinary stories that keep us readers engrossed. Your work is a beacon of excellence in the world of fanfiction. We eagerly await your upcoming chapters, as we know they will be nothing short of brilliant! |
![]() ![]() I love your story |
![]() ![]() So excited to see an update. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() I love this story! Thank you for posting it :) |
![]() ![]() Brb rereading this ily ily |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing read and I hope I read more soon! I would recommend adding a few more details about the characters since it took me quite some time to release Mai's hair, which was still short in this story. I was imagining her hair longer since 3 years had passed. I personally think it would help make a mental picture better but I do love this story and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so so so SO glad I read this story randomly just to read it again, because I hadn't gotten chapter updates (and now I know WHY) so I was DOUBLY excited to see there were a few more chapters. I've missed this story more than words can convey. Thank you for not giving up on it, or us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my word. That was so good! Cannot wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() GASPS Is it time for the secrets to be revealed?! What a cliffhanger - waiting with bated breath for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() After years now this remains to be one of my favorite fanfictions. I appreciate you continuing the story even though so much time has passed and all the real world issues you've had to deal with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You darling, darling author! Why would you do this to me? That cliffhanger is positively criminal! You know that every time you post a new chapter, I end up just rereading the entire story, just for the impact? Well, now you've left me in this state. Mai wasn't there to bounce his PK off of! Please tell me that there's at least some way to use her connection to him to resuscitate him? Or perhaps this incident will reveal the bond to observant onlookers (Madoka perhaps?) and then the plotting to the big reveal will begin! Obviously, he won't die. But this is the beginning of the end of Mai's secret, I can feel it in my giblets. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to the following chapters, please do not forget to continue the story as soon as possible. |