Reviews for Forever mine
KassieJean chapter 7 . 5/16
you lost me in this chapter.
Lady Spain chapter 32 . 7/6/2014
What an amazing story!
cary99 chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Love it,awesome
SowingFire chapter 32 . 10/21/2013
This was amazing!
SowingFire chapter 21 . 10/14/2013
LOVE that song 3!
Killua17 chapter 32 . 9/2/2013
Loved it!
XxlostwoodsxX chapter 32 . 6/28/2013
I really loved how this fanfic turned out )
and there was so much sex, that part was amazing :-)
xX.Not.So.Innocent.Xx chapter 32 . 5/19/2013
I loved this it was so awesome and fluffy at times ... well a few times :P But it was super! I love it, great work shiverdreams :D
Sleepy-Kun chapter 32 . 5/9/2013
Oh god, I'm crying, Sasuke was so sweet, and corny!
Sleepy-Kun chapter 23 . 5/7/2013
It makes sense! The scars are...well...scar-tissue! A tattoo is just ink seeped into the skin via needle. The reason this is an issue for vampires is they heal too quickly; you'd have to carve it with like a chainsaw to tattoo one.
Sleepy-Kun chapter 9 . 5/5/2013
Poor Kibbles (Yes, I have a pet-name for Kiba). He's so...perfect of a target for dramatic irony xD
It's okay though, he'd be super cute with Hinata, so yay for being okay with his blood being siphoned!
Oh, and she totally agrees to a second date and he ignores that fact.
Silly Kibbles!
Ranzilein chapter 32 . 3/30/2013
I really love this story! Thank you so much! But I'm a little sad that it's over :(
123 chapter 9 . 1/29/2013
it's their first fucking date and she decides to attack him and tell she's a vamp- and then NOT erase his memory, cause she doesn't like doing it ? and she's gonna trust him with her and her cousin's life after 1 date ? do you even realize how fucked up and unrealistic some of this shit is- i'm not talking about the vamp/wolf stuff- i'm talking about hinata- a centuries old vamp who can't control her thirst- and stupid enough to let kiba remember- it's just too ridiculous and stupid- how did she survive all this time being so stupid and reckless- and why haven't the hunters gotten her
123 chapter 19 . 1/29/2013
that werewolf girl isn't anything special to naruto- so why did the vampires let sasuke take her_ and her boyfriend thought it was ok to let the vamps kill more than a dozen werewolves instead of just the 1 girl ? this is some fucked up shit-and then in a few chapters you have this girl werewolf wanting sasuke (at least that's what you have itachi tell sasuke)- and her boyfriend just died and sacrificed a dozen other wolfs to save her life ?/ fucked up
123 chapter 15 . 1/29/2013
"I… he told me that if I didn't do it he'd find other vampires and ask them… and I was worried so… I decided to change him but it was the first time."
why is this ridiculous- cause vampires can compel humans to forget- and hinata thought killing/turning him was better than making him forget ? and she had never done it b4 ? not knowing if it would work or not-that's just really, really stupid-and for sasuke to say it wasn't her fault is even more stupid- cause it's clearly her fault . she could have even compelled him to NOT want to be a vampire-

the story would have been more interesting if naruto had to kill kiba and hinata killed herself because it was her fault_
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