|Reviews for Renewed Resolve|
| Broena chapter 2 . 5/17
Oh I TRULY DEEPLY MADLY WANT IT to be a Male! Harem. I am up for any male harem fic no matter the characters, fufufufu. Seriously I love rare pairs and Male Harems seem to be rare. You always see female harems and they're shoddily written with more Porn than Plot. If I wanted to read that I'd just read erotic manga or whatever they're calling it now?
| Gravity's Child chapter 7 . 2/28
Oh my god, they're so cute. I can't wait so see what Morty and Norman have caught!
| MoonLightView chapter 7 . 11/21/2014
I happened to stumble across this story, and I loved it. Please update this story. It's so interesting. :)
| SpArKiE37 chapter 6 . 9/1/2014
The setting for the Ash x Male Harem should be Sinnoh. But where ever you have your story take place I'm hopping you have Ash rotate his Pokemon because there are many that haven't been use since his adventures in Kanto. He Should also pick up Primape and recapture Pidgeot. Also Ash should capture more pokemon, he's had many opportunities to capture some Pokemon like Spiritomb, Evil Togepi, Mismagius, Hippopotas and many others that would help diversify his team.
| ckirkes2427 chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
great chapter! You can go to your option and turn off the ability to getting PM's from people because no matter what people will always want the next chapter yesterday. I love the bug catching contest sad to see that it never really came back in the newer games.
| ckirkes2427 chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
for guys that would fit Ash and Volkner I would say Morty and Steven. Morty is a great guy and would get along with both of them and he is psychic and can read minds and emotion. Steven is a bit older but mature and stable which could help keep them together and it would be easy to bring him into the story because he goes around the world looking for rare stones.
| JinxyClover chapter 7 . 6/23/2014
I can't wait for you to update! :D
| SpArKiE37 chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
You forgot to mention Kingler, Muk and his 30 Tauros
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/13/2014
I'm not a huge yoai fan but... I find this abosolutely adorable. Ash needs the love from someone who doesn't hurt him or call him a kid. I'd say start off with Volkner. Then put Lance, Riley, and Harrison (I don't know why he isn't in the list of people in the archives...) I hope you update someday. :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/13/2014
I actually like this. I'm not a huge yoai fan but Ash needs the love. I'd say Volkner. I mean I did fall for him in the games. But besides Volkner I'd like to see him with Lance, Riley, and Harrison. I think I'd love to see Ash with them. Though for the beginning Ash could be with Volkner. Lance, Riley and Harrison could slowly come into his life. :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
I love the idea of a harem . ashxvalkner/morty/steven stone/riley/and N that would be amazing love ur stories by the way
| storm-lighting-wolf-starlight chapter 6 . 4/28/2014
For the Harem it should be Volkner, Morty, Lance, Riley and Aaron
| Punintentionally Forgetting chapter 7 . 4/3/2014
this is so nice! i love the plot and the idea of volkner/ash; and wow has it been a long time since i've played pokemon - i ended up calling volkner the "hot gym leader that looked like naruto" in my head for months because i couldn't associate him with anything - but this fic really helped me out! because he is now "the hot gym leader that gets with ash in that one really good fic".
there are a couple grammar mistakes, which could be fixed with a quick read over (try resting your eyes for an hour or a day and then going back to reread what you wrote with fresh eyes - or find a beta). i feel some of the characters are ooc, but i've mostly played the games so i don't have an accurate feel of ash's relationships with everyone, but despite that, they are quite three-dimensional albeit formal. the "the rocket getting their act together finally" is also great! i know in unova they got smarter (and a new intro - let me tell you of the day my apartment building was subjected to thw cries of agony, despair, and the tears of a childhood lost) - and seeing the same quality in your fic is just great!
i also figure that one of your issues is "again" and "against" and similar issues - but once again, they can be fixed with a quick read over.
other than all that, keep up the good work! i can't wait to see where this goes!
| xChaosRebornx chapter 7 . 3/2/2014
Oh you dont know how bad I wanted this story to be a Yaoi harem! I absolutely love the idea of Ash x Morty and Ash x Volkner!
And about your other fic dealing with which region should the harem be based in... I vote Sinnoh! Volkner Flint possibly Lucas (the females rival in the game) ... And so many others lol!
Can't wait for your next update hope its soon!
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
Please update his fantiastic story!