Reviews for It's a Secret to Everybody: A Bath in Time
AlTheRipper chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Would it kill you to make the couple more consensual?
Groose, while a dick, is not a rapist. I hate it when teenage fangirls write rape and then make it cutesy and fine after the fact.
Groose/Link is an interesting couple, but not one that should rely on rape. Boys are curious. I see no reason why they wouldn't have sex WITHOUT Groose having to rape Link.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
I LOVE the yaoi fangirl Zelda you added. Sqwee! Just too good! (-)
Niera Gem chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Knew the vent trick. Also, the person that takes up the bath at night in the game is the headmaster. You can see through the vent! And finally, good oneshot sequel
Jenstone chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Who wouldn't have a nosebleed after seeing all of that? XD
Link's twin brother Lexx chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Oh I love all of your stories about Link (Squeal)
I read Thread of Fate I LOVED it ssssooooo much!
Can u plz writing for this story too?
I'm reading all the stories with Link that u wrote. Yes, I'm I big fan of Link's!
Can u pppllllzzz talk to me on my gmail? mine is
plz email mmmmeeeee!
Marcel Depierre chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Your story is really good ! It's a great read and I like this pair very much. Thank for sharing and I hope you write more
Aiko chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
omg XD poor and lucky Zelda. Anyway, I loved this and the first fanfiction, very well written
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
please write a groose x link story where you twist fledge into the sexual fun! ;D

i love these stories! you are very talented! ;)
shiv chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
pleeeease third part
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Uhh. Still wow. Vaati's Midna wrote this review. My email account got deleted so I can't log on. :-(
Taco234 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
she had a nose bleed
Dead account no longer here chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Hehehehehehehehehe, I thought link would drop the soap and then I would say ' dnt drop the soap! Dint drop the- he dropped it.' hehehehehehehehehe nice!
not-hamlets-ophelia chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
o/o i love you can we get married?
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
HA, the vent part was a nice touch!
KayCat chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
The part with Zelda made me lol and reminded me of my own nosebleed. This is one of the best lemons I've ever read! Congrats! This is remarkable!
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