Reviews for The Road of Temptation
Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Hello! It's me! Ready to review your three fics :)

This was a wonderfully contructed piece. Your writing style was really beautiful and I believe you had George well in character. Your use of description was awesome and the difference between 'showing and telling' was exactly right. I really loved it.

Just one small issue... I don't think George would ring the doorbell to his own house.

Other than that, great!
Moixxx chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
This is great! I dont like it when Fred dies and George gives up, I think he'd want to get revenge. Please update!