|Reviews for Filum Fatalis|
| Radicelle chapter 32 . 7/26
This is a freakishly long story. A freakishly good one too.
One of the best point of it is that you managed to keep a tension throughout it, even if they were already a couple. Most romance stories lose their breath once the characters get together, and you avoided that.
Secondly, I must thank you for your dedication to this story and fandom, since you managed to write so much.
Even if there are things I don't understand, like why Kanae doesn't think Neuro's abusive ways are nefarious, you managed to make them work as a fusional item.
Kudos to you.
| Lucy-Erza-Hearthfilia chapter 32 . 6/22/2014
sugoi! i read ur story with tons of pleasure!
| Tsukihime1991 chapter 32 . 5/13/2014
Ahhhhh soooo. Awesome...i loved it
| Fatally chapter 32 . 4/4/2014
Deliciously, sinfully wonderful
Much appreciation for the characterisations of all of the different people, as well as the ability to convincingly portray all of them in different scenarios.
| PhoenixBlade chapter 32 . 12/30/2013
Oh my gosh... It took me THREE DAYS to start and finally catch up to the most recent chapter! You write a lot... and I like that! More to read is always better in my book! It's been such an incredible journey so far and I hope you continue to guide us readers along in the next chapter of Yako and Neuro's life! :)
| Y'ha-nthlei chapter 32 . 12/6/2013
Ugh, ignore that last one. Hit the button too early.
If you want an honest critique of your story, I'm sorry to say, but this fic is kind of problematic in its romanticization of abusive relationships. I've been checking up on it for a while now, reading updates when I can, and frankly, I'm kind of shocked. Just in the first two chapters alone, I saw too many red flags and too much senseless abuse. I couldn't sympathize with ANY of the characters, they were too OOCly written and were too nasty for me to empathize with them. I understand that it's an AU, heck, I write quite a few AUs myself, and I understand that as we write, characters get changed by their experiences, but the characters in this have developed backwards. If you need evidence of problematic behavior, I'd be more than happy to go back and get it for you.
Coming from a LGBTQ person, the way you portrayed a transwoman was very disrespectful. Respecting personal pronouns is a VERY big deal, I can't stress that enough. Don't refer to a transwoman as a "(wo)man", "(s)he", or just "he". RESPECT. EVERYONE'S. PRONOUNS. Please. Please, if someone wants to use "she", "he", "they", "ze", "ey", or ANY gender-neutral pronoun, please respect that. Transphobia is a very real issue, and even though pronouns seem small, they make a gigantic difference in the way people feel.
Hope that helped, and good night.
| Y'ha-nthlei chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Okay. I figured I've been quiet about this long enough.
| D chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
THANK YOU FOR UPDATE. I need my Neuro x yako feels
| Dr34m3rGurl chapter 30 . 10/19/2013
I haven't reviewed in forever because I forgot but. BUT YES. OMG YES THEY GUNNA GET MARRIED FINALLY OMFG YEEEEEEEEEEEES
| iamthewerepire chapter 32 . 10/11/2013
We'll shit. Hope his parents aren't total dicks like neuro always said they were
| Pomato Mayo chapter 32 . 10/10/2013
OHGOD. THEY'RE IN GERMANY!? AIJHWGLKSDJGAISKODGLLD I THOUGHT NEURO HATED TO RETURN THERE! D8 anyway, love the smexy bed scenes. looking forward to more
| Dinopup chapter 32 . 10/8/2013
( OwO) Masteerrrr! you've done it again D: you ish far more capable of writing kraken scenes than le me but it's not like my ovaries exploded...B-baka! 3 TEACH MEH MASTER!I WANT TO LEARN MOAR! *opens le smut guide tab* :
| TheRunningHead chapter 32 . 10/7/2013
Dat bed scene. So hawt WRITE MOAR
| HuggingPillows chapter 32 . 10/7/2013
You finally put in the actual smexy stuff! Gawd,I love ya. 0w0/
It's very much worth the wait!
| IlikeNoms chapter 32 . 10/5/2013
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That was my fangirl mind talking. Anyway, that was a steamy one! OqO