|Reviews for Inkfallen|
| BohemianTypewriter chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I like your writing style, it's really good and interesting. don't try to change it. Also, you should expand it; I'd love to read it until its conclusion. It's one of the better fanfictions I've read in a while. Please, continue your story because it's Utterly Fantastic.
| Goldencity chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I liked it. It was written quite well on the whole, but there's one thing. In the first one or two paragraghs you're saying 'Dustfinger did this, Dustfinger did that', but then for the rest of it you switch to 'I did this, I did that'. It's just something to look out for in future chapters.
I did quite like it, and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! :)