Reviews for Necklace
nutella and a pencil chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
whoa...that was...sad...
And Bellatrix...whoa.
The whole unrequited love thing is sad, and good ol' Voldy's response is expected too. That's his sort of deal.
Do you love me?
No.
But I think Bella would eventually realize he would never love her, and just kind of went mad.
And slight criticism, the ending is a bit abrupt, but I understand what you're trying to do.
I'd suggest just adding the last line in a different para, just to add dramatic effect.
Sometimes I read the older stuff I never published, and the endings just seem off to me, but I can remember at the time I really liked it.
But anyways, great story, loved the descriptions,
nutella
Demetra Rose Riddle chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
will there be more?
asgardies chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I. love. this. It's really good because it focuses mainly on emotions, which for some reason I find interesting. I love her necklace as well, by the the way... :) Great job