Reviews for Necklace
nutella and a pencil chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
whoa...that was...sad...
And Bellatrix...whoa.
The whole unrequited love thing is sad, and good ol' Voldy's response is expected too. That's his sort of deal.
Do you love me?
But I think Bella would eventually realize he would never love her, and just kind of went mad.
And slight criticism, the ending is a bit abrupt, but I understand what you're trying to do.
I'd suggest just adding the last line in a different para, just to add dramatic effect.
Sometimes I read the older stuff I never published, and the endings just seem off to me, but I can remember at the time I really liked it.
But anyways, great story, loved the descriptions,
Demetra Rose Riddle chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
will there be more?
asgardies chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I. love. this. It's really good because it focuses mainly on emotions, which for some reason I find interesting. I love her necklace as well, by the the way... :) Great job